An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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THANK YOU! You get a bonus point for that.
And if you think that would be all you need to worry about, you would be w-r-o-n-g.
I see you slipping in that foreshadowing by calling it a mane before it's acknowledged as such!
Also, I got a chuckle out of imagining him fighting his ears as they were reflexively reacting to his emotions, even while he was trying to hold them still to feel them.
Horrifying scene, yet adorable to picture.
I need that on a t-shirt.
Now that one I know I have seen on a t-shirt.
Black Magic Nanomachines, that's another great band name. They would play synthcore and metal.
Jokes on them, they would issue the warrant for Brian, not this 'Barry' guy who is much cooler and totally sober. Well okay, maybe not the latter, but still.
Huzzah, another one down!
I'm enjoying this far more than I should, and I have work I need to be doing right now, but what's the harm in reading one more chapter...
I forgot how much I missed the slower, drawn out transformations in stories. Instant ones have a lot of shock factor, so many new things to take in all at once. The slow crawl of transformations like this is a wonderful thing, especially with the transition of genders I'm suspecting will make itself apparent soon. The feelings of dread, hopelessness, and that small amount of anticipatory fear. "How far will it go? Are hooves next? Do I have to learn how to walk on all fours or will it be natural?" So many questions and scenarios running through your head at any given moment, and eventually they'll all be answered. Great job so far, and on we go!
Also, my favorite little thing so far is the occasional southern accent that Comet has, exemplified in this chapter to help them out of course.
The other half of the question is that if someone build the ship out of the broken parts, board by board, which one would be considered the original?
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It sure is! Comet just happened to leave that out because it wasn't relevant to the plot and in-character maybe Comet didn't want to worry Berry into thinking somepony was taking her body!
Ship of Theseus is a fascinating concept! Similar topics on the nature of continued existence abound! Lincoln's Ax, Locke's Socks, etc. My favorite varint is "Can you cross the same river twice? The fluid of water you swam through is downstream now who knows where and the water in that spot is replaced by water from upstream. Is it the bank that defines a river? The flow of water changes that too!
I've seen A Prench Tale tackle the concept of continued existence much more thoroughly. That story is truly a love letter to the deeper themes and implications of this shared universe.
It’s both surreal and amazing to see content for this universe at this time. This story is wonderful so far; I look forward to it continuing and our heroes meeting up with the Mane crew 💚
11424556 I'm excited for you to keep going! I would dare say it keeps getting better and you're not going to be disappointed. Keep commenting and let me know!
Going to the AA meeting drunk and with pony ears and colorful hair. What can go wrong?