An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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In his drunken stupor he was wasted enough not to remember anything, but smart enough to remind himself he got his dick sucked. Halfway through the first chapter and I already love this so damn much
It's my pleasure to finally have the chance to read this! Let's jump right in, shall we?
Wonderfully descriptive, I love the word choice with empty cups everywhere representing the shrapnel of an explosive party.
That's one of the more subtle examples I've seen of cutie mark foreshadowing.
Made me laugh out loud at my desk.
Ah, I miss that about fanfiction, where authors aren't afraid to write in amusing little bits like that without worrying about it making the book "unprofessional". You would never see an author write something like that in a NY Times bestseller, which is a shame really.
I've went down almost this exact string of questions before. I'm so bad with names.
That kind of descriptive wordplay can only be written by someone who loves absinthe. You are correct though, that sort of crystalized green is mesmerizing in the light.
Lol, good to know I'm not the only one who sometimes confuses people because I'm feeding a personal inside joke.
Ah, another fun example of amusing writing that (sadly) you never really see in published novels.
Wha... I literally did exactly that after the RiffPonies drinking panel. I woke up clothed (but pantless) and worried I lost my con badge at some point. Only to find my pants tossed into the otherwise empty closet, with my wallet, badge, and phone all crammed into the single zippered pants pocket.
Ah, 'Barry', your drunk self and my drunk self would apparently understand each other's logic very well.
All in all, an amusing start to what seems like a promising story!
Now let's see how fast I can binge it while also writing snark about every single chapter...
This is impressive, to be completely honest. You really get a feel for Brian on a deeper level in very few words. Especially if you are someone who has had the same feelings in some manner or another. Addiction, depression or otherwise, you can connect with that feeling of "Yeah, shit's fucked, but hey man it's fun. Until your brain works properly, that is, so never let it reach that." Also, being unafraid to say that very thing, but not in some weird, edgy, poetic way of like 'Life is so dark and dreary, I must escape with my liquid pleasure.' There is some merit to using that sparingly, but I digress. Anyway, onto the next chapter, and thank you Twisted Spectrum for the recommendation!