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Dude living in Michigan. Been writing since middle school. I love games and playing piano. Married to a lovely artist.
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I'll admit, I had pretty low expectations going in to this based on the previous story, but I ended up really liking it. A lot.
Great job, man.
It's nice to see the little guy get some love, never really see that in erotica these days.
That was cute. I still think you squandered a golden opportunity to have Gallus ask for more ballbusting though.
this was cute. any chance we can get more of these two in a sequel.
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I'm not opposed to the idea but tbh I don't know where else to take the story from here
This was a surprisingly fantastic story and actually perfectly underlined logical reasons why she'd enjoy him. You also remained in character, keeping them who they are while telling this story. That was fantastic.
A little iffy in places with some minor details, but the grammar and spelling was clean and it never felt confusing. ^^
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If you're open to ideas, one idea I have is Smolder and Gallus working to try and do it as often as possible including during classes. An example would be something like pottery class and Gallus comes over to "show her how to do the technique right" only to end up in her. This could be done on and off through the days activities and no one suspects Gallus is doing anything because teeny weenie, but of course Smolder can't get enough of it.