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bdoubleowo


Nonbinary biromantic asexual. They/xe/ai/per. Yes, I'm a Hermitcraft fan.

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When Twilight wakes up one day, she sets out to have a wonderful morning- only to find that Rarity has Rainbow Dash's cutie mark. Confused by this, Twilight asks her how she got "her" cutie mark, and Rarity's story leads to wondering about her other friends' stories.

Inspiration taken from "Magical Mystery Cure" and "The Cutie Mark Chronicles."
"What My Cutie Mark is Telling Me" written by Daniel Ingram and sung by Ashleigh Ball, Andrea Libman, and Tabitha St. Germain.

Edit 11/27/22: Somehow this story has exactly 7000 words. That's cool.

Edit 4/8/23: Featured in "It is Recommendsday, My Dudes #107" :yay:
Edit 6/12/23: Reviewed by Ghost Mike ^^ Score was Weak but that's fitting, this is one of my first fics.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Very nicely written. I have seen some theories on this topic, but never a full-fledged story, let alone one with such good flow and solid grammar.

Regarding some technical aspects of the story, I have just one teeny tiny nitpick. If you want to mark an abrupt stop in character’s speech, or insert some remark of theirs, em dashes(—) or double hyphens (--) are the way to go—and these are used without any spaces between them and words. The en dashes (–) you are using now shouldn’t be used as such. Just a little thing that ought to bring this story closer to perfection :raritywink:

I hope to get back to reading the next chapter later tonight!

10070012 Thanks for the grammar tip, and thanks so much for enjoying this story! ^^

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You’re welcome :twilightsmile: I try to help wherever I can, even if it’s just little details.

10070043 And every little detail helps! :pinkiesmile:
10070067 It's Fluttershy's story next chapter (which is already in progress!) Thanks for the confidence! :twilightsmile:

This chapter felt a bit repetitive—especially given that the characters somehow forgot that Fluttershy was in the Sugarcube Corner, albeit they knew it in the previous chapter. (And also because Flutters’ story is very similar to RD’s). Still, it was a rather enjoyable short read :twilightsmile:

10089044 Oh! Didn't realize that part! Thanks for telling me!

Also, Fluttershy's original story overlaps with RD's original story, so I had to make some thing there.

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No problem! :twilightsmile:

Well, for example, you could have Fluttershy inquire how much Twilight knows already, so that she wouldn't repeat herself.

I was wondering how are you gonna handle Pinkie's story. Very well done!

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