Apples and Oranges

MButterflies & Red Skies
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Porn
After Applejack hooks up with Autumn Blaze, she goes to solve the friendship problem with Fluttershy. After Autumn rescues them, how will the two make up? And will Autumn Blaze be roped into their plans?
Sex
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Fluttershy
Applejack
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Autumn Blaze
Omegathyst · 2.5k words · 37 10 · 545 views

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Autumnblazelover61

Autumnblazelover61 #1 · Mar 6th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Awesome story. Can’t get enough of Autumn Blaze.

zwaph

zwaph #2 · Mar 6th, 2020 · · ·

Autumn stepped closer, leaning in and giving Applejack’s clit a loooong lick.

Oh sh... Incredible

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · Mar 7th, 2020 · · ·

What if Autumn Blaze been visited Applejack since their lessons?

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #4 · May 24th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It is kind of nice how it's fitted into the existing episode almost seamlessly ... as if they just had to cut that part out becuase it's a kid's show.
-Their flirtation is very fast and pretty on-the-nose. They just met!
-They just jump right into it with no buildup.
-Quite rushed, could definitely benefit from taking a slower pace and giving more details.
-Autumn goes into it with the premise of teaching AJ how to please a mare ... and the only thing she actually teaches is 'touch the clit'.
-“I...it’s a long story,” Autumn frowned, -- improper dialog tag.
-It's touching that AJ would go to such lengths to make Fluttershy happy ... if that’s really why she’s doing it?

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To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 50/100
Allure: 20/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 60/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 299/500
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