• Published 16th Dec 2011
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The Chronicle of the Return - DracoUnis



Humanity is returning to the world of Equestria, and one human adjusts to life in Ponyville

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Epilogue/Protest

*Camera pans across Capitol Hill, focusing on random figures in the background and zooming out at random. Protesting men and women are gathered in front of the steps. Many are holding signs reading "We deserve to know!", "Stop the secrecy!", or "Find the real culprits!"*

Cameraman: Camera's good.

*Camera refocuses on a young brunette woman in a suit holding a microphone with the CNN logo on it.*

Reporter: Check check.

Technician:*off-camera* Sound is on and good. We'll be going live in ten.

*The reporter adjusts her suit and hair to make sure she looks professional.*

Technician: Live in three, two…

Reporter: Good afternoon, this is Maria Stephans coming to you live from Capitol Hill in Washington, DC, where hundreds of protesters have gathered demanding answers from Congress regarding the continuing disappearance of people all over the world. In the three months since these sudden, random vanishings began, no answers as to who or what is behind this phenomenon or why it is happening. Governments world-wide have been tight-lipped about these events, and while several terrorist organizations have claimed responsibility and issued demands no definitive evidence of their involvement has been uncovered.

Now desperate people in nations around the world are protesting in their capitols, demanding answers to their questions. Many of the people here are missing family and friends, loved ones missing or vanished without a trace. Sometimes, right before their eyes. Just yesterday young Congressman Paul Andre vanished in the middle of a session of the House of Representatives. It seems no one is safe from…

Cameraman: Mary! Mary!

Reporter: What is it Bill, we're live for God's sake!

Cameraman: You're glowing!

*The young woman looks at her hand, now enveloped by a multicolored aurora.*

Reporter: Oh sh- *Loud boom and bright light, then she's gone.*

To be continued

Author's Note:

Just a little scene that I thought would tie this story up nicely. It wouldn't leave my head until I got it up.

The sequel is out, by the way.

Comments ( 15 )

This is a bit of a disappointment.I loved this story and I was hoping for more.If your intention is to create a sequel then this is a good ploy to draw more fans.But if it isn't...well your famous either way.Good luck whatever you choose.Thumbs up!

I know what you mean about having a scene stuck in your head.

Something smells of a sequel.

Wait, so is this like Avatar, only with a human and ponies instead of an avatar and humans?:rainbowhuh:

It's over? Aww. Will there be a sequel by any chance?

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Give it a read and all will become clear.:twilightsmile:

2576360Hm, might be a problem. Very little time with internet connection left. And I can only open up a few tabs if I wish to close down the laptop, otherwise it'll crash on re-opening it.

Aww, maaaan. That was kinda abrupt, I was hoping that it'd keep going for a while longer :fluttershysad:

This has been a great story. I look forward to the next arc.

Now, I was a little reluctant about this story, mainly because I was worried that it would be a cross-over just for the sake of doing one, and not being a serious story. While It has a few flaws on grammar and ortography, you manage to pull the crossing without the many plot-holes (storywise, mind you) and errors several writers seem to commit. The setting is adequate and the pace isn't rushed at all. I would recommend to check the grammar errors on the previous chapters, but the story structure is practically flawless. I give you and this story a 8/10, fave and like:pinkiehappy:.

HSXI, out.
May the Power protect you.

I'm only Speculating but is this a crossover of Golden Sun:rainbowhuh:

I'm only thinking because you said Air, Water, Fire and Earth

And only Adepts could Maniplulate the elements and Certain Members [By using theior Psynergy, which is a form of elemental magic created by focusing their MIND

Venus Adepts= Earth img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309174531/goldensun/images/thumb/4/42/Gs-isaac.jpg/240px-Gs-isaac.jpg

Mars Adepts= Fire img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309174814/goldensun/images/thumb/1/1e/GSGaret.jpg/175px-GSGaret.jpg

Mercury Adepts= water img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309175202/goldensun/images/thumb/8/84/GSMia.jpg/225px-GSMia.jpg

Jupiter Adepts= Wind/Air img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309175025/goldensun/images/thumb/f/ff/GSIvan.jpg/220px-GSIvan.jpg

4308140 Read the description. :pinkiesmile:

4308200 Oops of Avatar:pinkiesad2: I feel like a Meathead

4308205 It's okay! :pinkiehappy: I honestly doubt that you're the first person to make this kinda mistake. :derpytongue2:

4308231 Yeah Golden Sun was a fun RPG series in the game Adepts are the descendants of humans from ancient bloodlines [Or if they weren;t they somehow had contact with a Psynergy Stone

There were certain Pros and cons with Adepts

Pros and Cons

1. Earth/venus had balanced stats [Laking in Aglility though....]

2. Fire/Mars were robust [Most Defence, Attack and HP] [But had shitty speed and low eleemntal defence]

3. Jupiter/Air Adepts were the ones with [Weak defence, high Elemental power and Defence [and ridciously high Speed] and Low HP

4. Water adepts were the same as Air adepts but they are the healers [And they have even shitter speed than the Mars Adepts :rainbowderp:

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