• Member Since 26th Jul, 2013
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iMan203


Just your average brony here, nothing to see here, but maybe look into the future. Btw I have no idea how to work this so please excuse me. For everything.

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When computer software becomes powerful enough to create holes into other dimensions, a group of high schoolers get warped into way more than they bargained for. Epic adventures, romance, and an evil villain, why would they ever leave? What was an experiment, turns into a new way of life for a group of bronies as they fight for their new homeland here in Equestria! Bonds will be formed, sparks will fly, and the greatest power witnessed by either dimension will be released in the tale of the Ironclad pony.


(Please feel free to leave a comment for me to read! Whether it be compliment or constructive criticism. Haters will be loved and tolerated by me, the community gives mixed results.)

Book two- "To Protect and Serve" has been released for the public to view! Here is the link for you to continue the storyline on!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/126070/to-protect-and-serve

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 51 )

high school student selected for an experiment on alternate dimensions.

:rainbowlaugh: I'm a 100 percent sure I've seen this one before, I just can't remember where.

2949755 I wouldn't doubt it if you have, it definitely seems like a commonly used topic lol

In case you don't know I am give you a Death Glare

2961625 oh no :pinkiegasp: what have I done wrong?!

2962258 please tell me you have SOMETHING planned :facehoof:

2962361 of course I do! I have many things planned, I'm going to cover an array of topics I've always wanted to express. All in good time :pinkiehappy:
Even though I'm not quite sure what you mean by "something."

2962970 Ah! Cheers to that, I can continue writing without worry now! :derpytongue2:

2963106 are you SURE about that? :pinkiecrazy:

2963111 I'm positive! I've almost got chapter 4 finished. :ajsmug:

I approve of this nonsense :pinkiecrazy:

Ian this is literally the sexyiest thing you ever written.

2967334 that's great! I'm so glad I reformatted chapter one before you guys got to it! :twilightsmile:

I imagined Spike more of "GET THAT FLANK".

Bit of advice- please, use capitalization! pretty please?

Other than that, I really like it, especially the diversity of characters. Though I'll add I thought the romance with Twilight was a but rushed, it's still very nice!

Ian you godly SOB! You are amazing! Haha read the entire thing. Holy shit dude don't stop writing! But I better get some pony pussy!!

Why isn't Crisco, Tiki, Silver, Ironclad, and Bronze's names capitilized?

Normally I don't get all nitpicky when it comes to grammar and stuff, but names are one of the most important things about people, pets and everything else

2972996>>2973913 alright, I know that capitalization is needed, but sometimes on a tablet Im rushing out words through the story when I'm typing. Idk if ill go back and capitalize everything, but ill try to focus on names more often now, especially tiki. That's probably the most neglected of them all :facehoof:

2974013 you use Tablet? You should've said that in A/N and everyone would've understood..... mostly everyone

2974067 I actually did mention that in authors note of the first chapter I thought. Ill have to check that later.

2974160 thats alright, atleast ive finally got my laptopout and going through the story now.

Well.... didn't expect THAT ending.....

Comment posted by FxBlackJackx deleted Sep 7th, 2013
Comment posted by iMan203 deleted Aug 10th, 2013

Blue Fire is always so cool.... and why do these Goblins remind me of Orks for Warhammer 40k?

3023822 idk I've never heard of it before. :applejackunsure:

Great chapter and you have better luck in your fan fic than me. I keep getting writter's block

We have a pro writter here call the Newyork Times quick! Seriously great chapter XD

3034987 xD thanks a lot, I don't have trouble with writers block. I have a unique style where I just write on the spot, no planning, no thinking. It's lead me to some pretty crazy stuff, which only leads me to write more. I have like 3 more separate books planned for this little series I got going right now. :pinkiehappy:

Feels... it's always Feels :ajsleepy:

Heh... Heh heh, this reminds me of avatar...

3049060 well, when you out it that way... It really does. But I haven't seen the movie entirely and it was a few years ago when I last saw parts of it. I might actually go and watch it some time. :twilightsheepish:

Oh my god. He's a dragonborn :yay:
It's so awesome :rainbowdetermined2: Have a moustache :moustache:

3052737:rainbowlaugh: I really thought about that when I wrote the chapter, I'm surprised it took that long for someone to mention it

Aw... its over? Why do I have a feeling the next one is going to be a Sunset type story?

3056539 that's not actually where I was going to go, you'll just have to wait and see :ajsmug:

I could help you with the cover art . Just tell me how it should look like

3060792 I was just looking for a picture of the 4 original characters. Ironclad, Bronze Hammer, Silver Dust and Tiki. Something along the lines of the squad walking down a foresty trail or something. Just tell me if you need anything else, or a different way of contact
:twilightsmile:

I like! I like a lot! Keep more chapters coming

Why do i picture ironclad as one badass reptilian death ma-fuckin-chine?

3061833
You'd better not become lazy.......... WRITE MOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRR!!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

All I need is the OC's description

3082696 alright, let me dig up the descriptions somewhere in book one and I'll message them to you

3065011 I mean, if you liked it so much, I should probably tell you that the second book has been published :raritywink:

Ian, Your quests inspired me to write Manehatten Zombie Outbreak. Keep up the sexiness bro!:pinkiehappy:

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