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Have you ever wondered about the parents of FIM characters. How they met, some adventures, how they fell in love.
Well, here it is told so you can know.

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Riz

Hi there, I find your story concept to be an interesting one. But can you tell me briefly about this chapter because my mind is having trouble to understand it. Not that I'm saying it's a bad story or any negativity...

1103920 This is why I wanted to write stories on the back history. :ajsleepy: Okay, the ALicorns and Dragons were in a fierce war that raged on through thousands of years. So, in fit to make peace, and with both sides recently losing major capital cities, Hera, the daughter of Odin, sued for peace using the incentive of marriage to unite the races. As prince, and future king of the dragons, Neltharion was the one chosen to wed Hera.
Of course, Zeus doesn't take kindly to this, since he fancies Hera for himself.

It's a long and complicated back history. I'm sorry if you didn't get it, but I couldn't put it all down in this one instance. You'll see more later, or in another story of mine.

Sorry for any confusion, I just like to detail my history.

Riz

1103951
Okay let see if I get this...

1.Alicorns & Dragons are at war.
2. Alicorn Princess is being force wed to a Dragon Prince.
3.Zeus *who I presume is an Alicorn ?*wants Alicorn Princess for himself.

And who is Malygos ?

1103972 If you knew about WOW (World of Warcraft) You'd know that Malygos is the ruler of the blue flight of dragons. But in this universe, he's just a friend of the Neltharion.

(It was Hera's idea about the wedding. She wanted to end the war at any means neccesary.)

(Zeus is an alicorn yes.)

Riz

1103980
Wait is Here the Alicorn Princess's mom ?

1103987 Hera is the mother of Luna, Celestia, and Xenos (a character who will appear later on in another story.)
Neltharion is Celestia and Xenos's father.

Riz

1103994
Hmm...interesting. I'll be looking forward for this..

Riz

1103994
Wait Hera is Luna and Tia's mom and Neltharion is Tia's dad but not Luna's ? I'm sorry with all this questions...

1104026 Luna is Celestia's half sister in this universe.

1104026 And don't be sorry. Questions help out everyone. Like me. If you have a problem or question, let me know. It helps me improve my stories.

Riz

1104035
I see....:pinkiesmile:

Oh yeah, back in my now-writing days, I did something like did this too.

Iiiii like it. have my thumb. @_@

This is quite sweet:twilightsmile: You may want to read over it for small grammar oddities and some funny wording, and the transition between Neltharion's thinking and the narration could be smoother.

I am not the only author to reference Skyrim, yay! :pinkiehappy:

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