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I'm a fan of Persona 5, and Persona 5 Royal.:heart::pinkiehappy:

This looks promising, I'm tracking this story.

Definitely keeping an eye on this

Looking promising, but I have a few suggestions. First I think it’d be best to do another proof read, at least 𝓕𝓸𝓻 basic grammar and place where you can replace a period with a comma. Second you can definitely add a lot more descriptive lines. I think it’d be more immersive if you tell me how Celestia felt about how creatures were committing suicide, or show how rainbow dash was feeling about discord with a furrow in her brow or describe how there might’ve been rushing ponies the mane 7 needed to dodge in order to get to the town plaza.

Really??!! Two Hero teams facing each other??!! Because of a ridiculous and OVER Clique of failed communication with each other!!!

IF the Ponies finally FIND out that the Phantom Thieves are the Good Guys the whole time. They criticized themselves for being pure dumbass for this. I hope the Phantom Thieves get a major apology, or one of them scold the Ponies for fighting the WRONG People. :facehoof:

Again, another promising story left to die...so frustrating.

Any big plans for Spike in this?

Really interested in it

Apologies folks, I know know a lot of you were really looking forward to seeing how this whole fanfic played out but please understand that I was and still am working as well finishing up college so I was completely under constant pressure from my private life, I do plan on coming back but that doesn't mean I'll be releasing more chapters consistently as am working on finishing some older titles as well as working at my part time job irl, I hope you can understand and I'll try to make it up to you guys as much as possible. Thanks for the support and once I again I apologize

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I'll have to see, I gotta a lot of catching up to do haha

11867158
Ok
I just hope Spike isn't sidelined hard.


11867157
I certainly understand how busy things can get

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