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The Ultimate Weapon And Mirror Gem Of Equestria - OPTIMUSPRIMEG1



Me and my friend end up in Equesteria as our favorite characters, me an OC I created, and her Lapis Lazuli.

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A Monster In The Forest

??? Pov

I slowly started to wake up to the sounds of birds chirping and the leaves of trees rustling in the wind. 'W-where am I?!' I thought as I just continued to stare up at the treetops, thankful they were blocking the sun from shining down on me, at least, not fully shining on me. 'How d-did I get here? A-and where's Rick?!' panic was starting to fill my mind as I tried to move, but nothing happened! I couldn't feel my arms or legs! Wait...

'I can't feel anything at all!!' I shouted in my mind as I began to hyperventilate, or at least, I did so in my mind which was freaking me out even more! 'Rick!! R-Rick where are you?! Help!!' I cried out in despair, wishing my friend would suddenly appear and help me.

But my wish did not come true and I was left alone in a forest with no feeling in my body, unable to cry out for help. 'RIIIIIIIIIIICK!!!'

Rick's POV

"Angie!" I shouted as I jolted awake, eyes wide and sweat dripping down my face. I looked around before sighing sadly. "Just a nightmare." I laid back down on my bed, staring up at the ceiling. It had been four months since I've been in Equestria, four months since I've become my OC, four months.....

A whole four months of having no luck in finding Angie.

I've done my best to look for her, going around, city to city, town to town, etc. I've asked anyone if they had seen any signs of her, put up some flyers with a picture of her current form, hell, I've even started mining thinking she was in the ground somewhere.

But I didn't find her. It didn't help that the populace still hasn't gotten over the whole Discord rule thing, so they were either on edge or ran for the hills whenever I was around, which kinda angers me but I had done my best to let it go lest I want Phoenix to come out and reduce the planet to space dust. Including Angie.

That is if she is here.

I immediately banished that thought the moment it sprang up. Angie is here. I know it! I can feel it! ' But what if she isn't? What if she's in a different Equestria?' I thought to myself before shaking my head. ' No! I can't think that! I know she is here. And I won't rest until I find her.'

With that in mind, I got out of bed and put on my gear, and opened my door to leave, only to see a maid just about to knock on the door, gaining a look of surprise when I opened it. "Oh, you're awake. Usually, you'd be still asleep." the maid said, making me smirk a bit.

"Yeah well, I figured I'd wake up early this time, Tide Breeze. Tia and Lulu waiting for me in the dining hall?" I asked her, knowing the answer.

She nodded her head. "Yes, they are, like always. You know this by now." Breeze said with a roll of her eyes. I chuckled a bit while the two of us walked through the halls of the castle while talking, joking, and just having a bit of fun. We eventually reached the dining hall, seeing both Luna and Celestia giving us surprised looks.

"You got ready quickly Rick." Luna said, "Usually Tide would have to drag you out of bed if you weren't up in time."

"Eh, I was already awake and ready when Tide Breeze came to get me." I said as I sat down at the table, I immediately noticed the worried look on both of their faces. "What?"

"Nightmares again?" Luna asked, I let out a tired sigh as I slumped in my chair. "Rick, if you want, I can just make them go away, you know that."

"I know, but I guess I just...I don't know, let them stay so that way they'll remind me that Angie is still out there somewhere." I said sadly, my ears drooping down. I hear hoofsteps walking over to me before I was hugged by both Luna and Celestia.

"We'll find her, our guard is already looking for any trace of her," Celestia said while rubbing my back with her wing.

"Then why haven't we found anything yet? There's not even a whisper about her." I said, starting to grow more upset when I thought that maybe she ended up in some other Equestria. An Equestria that might kill her? Or worse, she could-

"Rick, please calm down. You'll see her again." Luna said as she too rubbed my back with her wing. Damn it, I feel like a little kid who needs his sisters for comfort. But....this does help me a little, so I'm not complaining. We stayed like that for a few minutes before the two pulled away. "Better?"

"Y-yeah." I said, wiping my eyes of any stray tears. "But usually it's the big brother or sister who does the comforting. Not the other way around." I said jokingly, this caused the two Alicorns to smile a bit.

"Even older siblings need to be comforted by their younger siblings." Celestia said with a soft smile. "And since when were you the older brother?"

"Since I'm more responsible? And taking care of you two whenever I can." I said in response, remembering the times I had to remind the two to eat and stuff whenever they get too wrapped up in work.

"He does have a point sister," Luna said to Celestia, who pouted in response, which was just adorable.

"And I hate it when he does," Celestia said, still pouting.

"Aaaw, does my little sis need a hug?" I teased her, receiving a wing slap from her, though there were no intentions of hurting me, maybe just a little to get me to stop teasing her. "Aw, I think you do. You're all sorts of cranky."

"You're treading dangerous waters, Rick," Luna said as she stifles a few giggles, I just smirked and keep doing what Luna warned me about.

"But look at little Tia, she's all pouty and cranky." I earned another wing slap from the pouting Solar princess, causing me to laugh. "Ok ok. I'll stop."

"Good." Celestia said before wing slapping me again, "Just for good measure." the three of us laughed and I forgot all about my nightmare. "So, now what do we do?"

"Well, I'm planning on going out to look for Angie again." I said with a determined look on my face. "I know she's here somewhere, I can feel it. But I don't know where else she could be." the two nodded their heads.

"We'll try to aid you the best we can, but there are still some ponies who still need some calming down," Celestia said, and I knew the only ponies freaking out were the nobles and I knew what they were freaking out about. I can tell Celestia was thinking the same. "Yes, they are still wanting to have you turned to stone or sealed in Tartarus because you're a threat and an abomination."

"So same bullshit as always," I said just as some servants came out of the kitchen with plates of food, which was all vegetables and fruits. I grimaced a bit from this, I can survive being vegan for a while, but I need other sources of nutrients as well, aka meat. But I don't want to seem more like a monster than I already am, Tia and Lulu would be okay as they've known some creatures to eat meat and gotten used to it, but the citizens of Equestria are another story. They find out I eat meat, it'll cause them to freak out and think I might eat them which was bullshit as I don't eat other sentient beings, I'm not a monster. "Good, the foods here, it'll help me keep my energy when I look for Angie." I said as I began to eat or at least tried to before a guard came barging in, a few claw marks covering his body and a panicked look on his face.

"Your majesties! There's a creature in the forest! It's been attacking the city and anypony who goes too close to the borders of the forest!" the guard said quickly, this made me stand up with a serious look on my face.

"Where was it last seen?" I asked him, and he looked at me before looking at the princesses who nodded for him to tell me.

"I-it was last seen heading towards the borders of the forest." the guard said and I nodded before walking towards the door.

"I'll deal with this creature seeing how I can find it before it can reach the town thanks to my speed," I said,

"Take a weapon with you, you may need it," Luna said to me and I just smirked.

"Lulu, you should know by now. I am a weapon." with that said I ran out of the castle, becoming a yellow blur as I ran towards the forest. "Okay, he said it was heading towards the edge of the forest, but he didn't say how long ago that was so I'll need to kick it into overdrive if I don't want a monster escaping and killing innocents." with that in mind, I kicked it into overdrive and ran even faster.


"Just where the hell is this thing?!" I said angrily as I stopped running, having spent at least three hours searching for this monster yet didn't find anything so it's safe to say I was pretty pissed right now cause this monster was proving to be difficult to find and capture, or eliminate if necessary. I let out a tired sigh before turning in the direction of the castle. "I guess I'll just have to go back and tell the princesses that I couldn't find it. Maybe I'll have to send out a few drones."

I suddenly stopped when my ear twitched after picking up the sound of a breaking twig from behind me. I remained still as I listened for any more sounds, picking up a low growl from the same area the twig broke. 'Got you.' I thought as I flexed my fingers a bit, ready to blast the beast with a bolt of lightning should it decide to attack.

Which it did, jumping out from the cover of the bushes with a roar only to be met with the back of my sparking fist to its face and causing it to let out a pained yelp as it was sent flying into a tree. "Timberwolf? Was that the monster that-" I paused when I saw the creature was in fact not a Timberwolf, or a regular wolf. It looked like a pony except it had wolf-like paws and sharp fangs and its eyes were completely white. "Werewolf? Didn't know Equestria had those here, well, can't really call you a werewolf, werepony I believe is the correct term." I said as the werepony growled at me, a bit of blood leaking from the corner of its mouth. "Aw, what's the matter? Did I hit you too hard?" I asked it, a cocky smirk on my face.

The werepony growled even louder before it pounces at me again but I quickly duck under it and when it was right above me I suddenly jumped up with my fist connecting with its gut. The werepony lets out a strangled yelp as it was sent flying into the air before it came crashing down, knocked out from either the fall or my punch. "Tch, that was way easier than I thought, sometimes I forget how ponies can overreact to some things."

Suddenly, before I could react, something had pounced onto my back and began to claw at it but I quickly zapped it off of me. "What the fuck?!" I shouted in confusion as I turned to see what attacked me, seeing another werepony, and another, and another, and another. Suddenly, I was surrounded by at least twenty of the monsters. "Oookaaay, this might be bad." I said as I looked around at the wereponies who were growling and glaring at me, seeing no way out of this, my fists sparked with lightning. "Alright you overgrown mutts, you want to go, let's go!"


3rd POV

Celestia and Luna waited anxiously for Rick to come back after he went out to deal with whatever was out there. "Sister, do you think he will be alright?" Luna asked Celestia in worry. "He's been out there for a long time."

"I am sure he is fine, remember, he has defeated Discord so whatever this monster is, I'm sure Rick can-" the doors to the throne room suddenly opened, revealing a slightly bloody Rick. Everyone in the room went wide-eyed at the sight and before they can do anything, Rick held up his hands.

"Relax, the blood's not mine, at least, not all of it." he said as he walked into the room though he was lying, the blood was his but he didn't want the ponies to know that. "Found out what it was that attacked the guard. It was a pack of wereponies, mean ones."

"Wereponies?! But there hasn't been a werepony for a long time! Let alone a whole pack of them! Are you sure it was a werepony?" Luna asked Rick, a bit relieved to see that he was alright but at the same time worried that some wereponies will attack innocent ponies.

"Pretty sure, sharp teeth, wolf-like paws instead of hooves, mangy fur?" Rick asked and getting a nod of confirmation from Luna. "Then yep, wereponies, but don't worry, I took care of them already. They didn't stand a chance against someone who can use lightning to attack. You wouldn't happen to have a cure for them would you?"

"There is a way to calm their aggression but not cure them, so they'll be stuck as wereponies but at least they'll be able to think clearly." Celestia said and Rick nodded his head, though he would have to go and figure out a cure for them as he doubts they would like to stay as wereponies for long.

"It'll have to do, while you're doing that, I'm gonna take a bath before the blood starts to dry and stain my fur." Rick said as he walks away, wanting to get clean as soon as possible.

"See you later then Rick, and thank you for taking care of the wereponies." Luna said to him with a smile and he turned his head and smiled back.

"Hey, it's what heroes do." he said before leaving the throne room, not noticing the small bite mark on his side healing up.


Night had come and Luna was going to go check on Rick cause ever since he had that run-in with the wereponies, she's been feeling off about him like something was wrong with him. Speaking of wereponies, they had been gathered up by the guard and given the cure to their aggression and were also told that Rick would be making a cure for them in his lab so they can return to their normal lives, that is if they wanted the cure.

Luna approached the door to Rick's room before knocking. "Rick? Can I speak to you for a second?" Luna asked, receiving no response. "Rick? Are you in there?"

The door opened and there stood Rick, but his fur glistened slightly with sweat and he was panting as if he just went on a twenty-mile run, which should be easy for him because of his speed but still. "Y-yeah?" he asked her.

"Rick, are you alright? You look a bit under the weather." Luna said worriedly and he nodded his head with a smile.

"Yeah, I-I'm fine, must have caught a fever or something while in the Everfree, you know how that forest is sometimes." Rick said with a chuckle but Luna wasn't sure if it was something from the Everfree.

"Rick, were you perhaps bitten by one of the wereponies during your encounter?" she asked him, thinking that might have something to do with Ricks's strange illness. He just scoffs a bit at that.

"No way, I was running circles around those guys, they would have been to be pretty fast in order to see me let alone bite me." Rick said cockily.

"Rick, this is serious, if you have been bitten, then you might be at risk of becoming a werepony as well. And given your powers, a very powerful werepony." Luna warned, not noticing the moon slowly peek out behind some clouds in a window behind her.

"Come on Lulu, I'm telling you, if I was bitten I would have known about it." Rick told her, his gaze slowly turning to the moon.

"But didn't you say you can heal much faster than normal beings? What if you were bitten and it healed before you could notice it?" Luna said and Rick held his chin in thought at that, his attention no longer on the moon.

"Hmm, you could be right about that, I do tend to somewhat not pay attention when I'm fighting." Rick said, his gaze slowly returning to the moon, which was halfway uncovered by the clouds. "U-um, mind telling me w-what symptoms there are?"

"Well for one, is the compulsion to stare at the moon, chills, fevers, and other flu-like symptoms, and-" Luna noticed that Rick's attention wasn't on her but on something behind her. "Rick? Please tell me you're not staring at the moon." he gave her a sheepish grin, showing her his slowly sharpening teeth. "Oh no."

"G-guess I did get b-bit." Rick said as he was starting to breathe harder, the whites of his eyes slowly turning black. "Lulu, you t-think that spell m-might work on me by a-any chance?'' Before Luna can answer, Rick suddenly holds his gut in pain, a beastly growl escaping him as he backs up. "T-this is gonna g-get ugly." Rick then closes the door in Luna's face,

"Rick! Open the door right now!" Luna shouted as she banged against the door then she heard a loud growl followed by the sound bones breaking and tearing flesh. "Rick!"

"Luna! What is going on?!" Luna turned to see Celestia and a few guards running up to her.

"It's Rick! He's been bitten by a werepony and is turning!" Luna said in panic and Celestia's eyes widened.

"B-but being turned usually takes around three days to do so!" Celestia said in equal panic. "Unless of course there's a full moon!" This made both sisters look out the window and see the moon was indeed full as the clouds fully revealed it. "Buck! We need to give him the spell now before he goes on a killing spree!"

"I know! But I can't get the door open!" Luna shouted as she slammed her body against the door then a loud howl was heard from Rick's room, making both royals and the guards freeze in fear before everything went quiet and nothing but silence was heard for the next few minutes as the group just stood there, frozen. "R-Rick?" Luna called out.

Suddenly, something broke through the door and landed in front of the group while a gust of wind blew all the torches in the area out, nearly leaving the ponies in darkness if Celestia hadn't lighted her horn, revealing a large wolf-like beast with fur black as the night, it's silver eyes seemed to glow in the darkness as it looked at them, Celestia made her horn glow brighter, revealing more of the beast, and they saw the thunderbolt shaped tail on it with ears that were slightly bigger than a regular werepony's. "R-Rick?" Celestia asked and the beast that was once Rick growled as it crouched to the ground, teeth bared.

“S-sister, I think we should-” Rick then jumps at them with a loud beastiel roar. “-run!”

Celestia and the guards didn’t need to be told twice as they turned and ran from Rick just as his claws stabbed into the ground where they were standing, Rick growls as he watches the ponies run from him before letting out a howl that echoed throughout the castle.

“Sister we can’t let ourselves be bitten especially on the night of a full moon!” Luna said as they turned a corner.

“Then just change the phase of the moon!” Celestia yeled as she starts to fall behind.

“I can’t! If I did it would cause all sorts of problems for not just Equestria but for me as well!” Luna yelled back, “And me and Rick told you not to eat all that cake this morning!!”

“Is now really the time Luna!?” Celestia yelled as she did her best to keep up. “We need to give him the cure but how?!” A roar was heard and Celestia looked behind her only to yelp and duck to avoid a swipe from Ricks's claws, who had easily caught up to the group. “How is he this fast?! Normal wereponies are never this fast?!”

“He’s not a pony remember?! So being a werepony might be different for him!” Luna shouted as she turned her head and shot Rick with her magic, making the werewolf yelp in pain as he was sent flying back. “Sorry, brother!”

Rick quickly recovered before he roared louder as he chased them through the halls. “Luna, we can’t keep running all night!” Celestia said through her panting breaths.

“You mean you can’t keep running all night sister.” Luna said before flapping her wings to make a sharp turn and get out of the way of Rick as he slams into a wall.

Rick shakes his head before growling and continuing to chase the ponies before managing to catch up to a guard. Rick roared as his claws sink into the guard's flesh, causing him to scream in pain as Rick was about to bite him before he was blasted by gold and blue magic beams, sending him crashing through a few walls.

“Are you alright?” Celestia asked the guard as she picked him up in her magic.

“Y-yes, it’s j-just a scratch.” The guard lied and both princesses knew it.

“If you can walk, get to the medic team and get the cure, and whatever you do, don't look at the moon.” Celestia said with worry in her voice. She wasn't gonna take any chances. Rick wasn't a pony so the normal forms of infection might be different with him.

The guard nodded his head before he ran off with a slight limp. They then heard growling and turned to see Rick glaring at them. “Sister, we cannot keep running forever, we have to stop Rick right here, right now.” Luna said as her horn glows, though she was pained to have to fight her brother but she knew it had to be done.

“You are right Luna.” Celestia lit her horn as well prepared for a fight. “Hopefully that guard makes it to the medical wing and is cured, then he will be able to warn them so they can come to cure Rick.”

“But we have no idea if it will work on him, his biology is completely different than a ponies.” Luna said as she and Celestia fired beams at Rick, who dodged them with ease before lunging at the two with his claws but they managed to create a shield to block the attack.

“It's all we have right now Luna!” Celestia said as she held her shield while Rick continuously slashes at it.

Rick lets out an angered roar as he continued to slash at the shield, his claws not leaving a scratch on it. Luna then used her magic to bind his arms and legs together, causing him to fall to the ground and struggle against the magical bindings.

“Good work luna mow we just have to hope he can be cured.” Celestia said panting and flapping her wings to help cool off.

“Sister, are you alright?” Luna asked her in concern.

“Y-yes I am fine, its…its just a while since I've had to move that quickly.” Celestia said with a blush.

Luna chuckled a bit, “Rick did offer to train you, it’s your own fault for not accepting.” Luna said, then they heard growling from RIck as he continued to struggle.

Celestia pants and frowns. “Fine, maybe I do need to work out a bit more.”

“Well, maybe he will train you when he is back to normal.” Luna said as she frowned at the snarling beast.

“Let’s get him to the medical wing.” Celestia adds her magic to Rick’s bindings.

Luna nodded as the two carried Rick off to the medical wing, with Luna closing Rick’s mouth shut so he can’t bite anyone along the way and when they got there, they see numerous guards waiting along with a few doctors. “G-good heavens! This i-is completely different than a werepony!” one of the doctors said in shock upon seeing Rick.

“We know but we are hoping the cure will still work on him.” Celestia said with a frown.

“B-but your majesties, t-there is a fifty-fifty chance it may not w-work on him.” the doctor said nervously. “His b-biology is completely d-different.”

“Fifty-fifty eh? Those odds sound good.” Luna said as she and Celestia pinned Rick to the ground. “Give him the cure now.”

“Yes, your majesty. I just want to say, if it doesn’t work it isn’t my fault.” The doctor said before getting closer to Rick and lit his horn as he started to cast the spell.

Everyone watched as Rick's eyes glowed the same color as the doctor's magic for a few seconds before it disappeared and Rick went unconscious. “Did…did it work?” one of the guards asked.

Rick then groaned as he opened his eyes again and Luna released his jaws from her magic. “Ugh, I feel like I was hit by a train.” Rick said in a deeper voice, then looked around at the group. “What’d I miss?”

Everypony lets out a collective sigh of relief. “Thank goodness it worked.” Celestia said.

“What worked? Why does my head hurt? Why am I craving fresh meat? Why am I pinned down like this?” Rick asked as he looked at his bindings.

Luna sighed and slowly released the bonds holding him. “You were bitten and turned.”

“Oh…” Rick said, his ears drooping as he remembers what happened earlier. “Damn it.”

Celestia puts a hoof on Rick’s shoulder. “Don't worry you didn’t hurt anyone.” She lied to calm him.

“Bullshit.” Rick said, giving her a look as he held up his claws, which were stained with blood. “If I didn’t hurt anyone, then who the hell's blood is this?”

Celestia’s eyes widened as she looked between Luna and Rick. “Um, would you believe you cut yourself as you were transforming?”

Rick merely growled, “Be honest with me right now, how many?” he asked the two, and they looked hesitant on telling him but knew he wasn’t gonna take a lie for an answer so with a sigh, Luna told him.

“You hurt one, but they will live.” Luna said and RIck looked down a bit.

“Don’t know what hurts more, the fact that I nearly killed someone, or that my two sisters think I can’t handle being told something like that.” Rick said as he stood and began walking out. “If you need me, I’ll be in the forest learning how to use this form.”

“Wait!” Celestia starts but Luna holds her back with a hoof and shakes her head.

“Leave him, we’ve already hurt him by thinking he couldn’t handle the truth.” Luna said as she watched Rick leave, a saddened look on her face.

Celestia sighs and lowers her head. “I just didn’t want to make him feel any worse than he already does. He has been obsessed with finding his friend but no success so far. I fear he's going to isolate himself.”

“I know Tia, but Rick won’t isolate himself, he’ll be too stubborn to give up his search.” Luna said, a frown on her face as she thought what might happen if Rick did isolate himself but shook that thought out of her head. “The best we can do for now is comfort him when he needs it.”

“Alright, I should go calm down the rest of the guards.” Celestia sighs and walks off.

“You do that.” Luna said before looking down in sadness, “I’m….I honestly don’t know what to do right now.”

Luna starts heading back to her room but as she walks the halls alone she starts to hear whispers. No matter how hard she looks she can’t find the source of the whispers until she comes to her own room with a pony coming out of it.

“Oh, hello your majesty.” the pony said, giving the princess a bow.

“What were you doing in my room?” Luna asked a bit suspicious of the mare in a maid uniform.

“Um, cleaning it your majesty.” the maid said,

“Y-yes of course, my apologies.” Luna sighs and enters her room. But as she walks into her room, she still hears the faint whispers before shaking her head. “Maybe some sleep will help me clear my head.” she said as she laid down on her bed and goes to sleep.


Rick watches as some deer grazing in a field, his new hunger for meat forcing him to hunt. ’That’s it, keep eating while not noticing that large predator about to kill you.’ Rick thought as he slowly crawled towards the deer, making sure to keep as low to the ground as possible.

Just before Rick was ready to pounce he steps on a twig snapping it and making the deer lookup at him. “Huh?”

Rick froze, ’Fuck! They’re sentient?!’ Rick thought angrily before turning and walking away. ’There goes my meal. Why does Equestria have to have so many damn sentient creatures?!’

Before he got too far away he heard a yell for help and loud stomps and splashes. “Help! Rockadile!”

Rick ran back to where the deer was and saw a Rockadile trying to eat the deer, “Fuck.” Rick said and his stomach growled. “Double fuck.” he lets out a sigh before charging at the large crocodile. “This is gonna suck!” he shouted as he slashed at the beast's eye, causing it to roar in pain.

“Aaahhh!” The deer yelled and hid inside of a dead tree as Rick and the Rockadile fought. The Rockadile tries to bite Rick’s tail but he was too fast for the best.

“You’re too slow!” Rick taunted as he dodged another bite from the large crocodile, staying on the defensive for now as he led the Rockadile back to the water, an idea in his mind. The Rockadile continues to follow Rick, snapping its jaws at him trying to take a bite out of him until it is completely submerged in the water. Rick grinned as he stood on the Rockadile’s back, his claws sparking a bit, “Hope you live up to your name rocky!” Rick said as he jumped off the beast and onto dry land, shooting a bolt of lightning at the water.

The Rockadile roars in pain as it is electrocuted, twitching in pain before going limp and starting to sink in the water. “Well, that was easy.” Rick said as he was about to grab the Rockadile but thought against it, “Yeah, there’s no way I’m going in the water, I’ll just fry myself.” it was true, his body continuously emits electricity, meaning that if he were to go in the water, he’ll just fry himself.

The deer peeks out and yelps seeing one of the predators is still there and hides again, unaware that his horns are still visible. Rick just raises an eyebrow at the deer before sighing. “Hey, you ok?” he asked the deer.

The deer slowly peeks out. “Y-you aren't going to eat me are you?”

“No, I don’t eat things that can talk.” Rick said with a shake of his head. “But again, you ok?”

“Y-yes…I was…am…so scared.” The deer said slowly coming out. Rick suddenly felt something hit his leg, when he looked down he saw the Rockadile’s tail sticking out of the water.

“Oh good, now I don’t have to go hunting again.” Rick said as he grabbed the tail and began to pull the Rockadile out of the water, discovering that his strength had been reduced a bit as he had a hard time pulling the Rockadile out of the water.

“I…I uh…am gonna leave now.” The deer said backing away.

Rick merely grunts in response as he continues to pull the Rockadile out of the water while the deer leaves. Once it was fully out Rick began to inspect it, knowing how tough a regular crocodile's hide is, so he can expect this thing's hide to be even tougher. “Now how am I gonna eat this if I can’t get through the skin?” Rick flips it over and tests the underbelly and finds it is weaker and his claws to pierce it. “Ah, good, now I just need to get a fire going cause I’m not eating this thing fucking raw.” Rick said as he gathered a few logs in the area and made a fire before cooking pieces of the Rockadile over it.

Rick sighed as he cooked the pieces of meat before looking up at the sky, “Bet you would get a kick out of this eh Angie? I can already hear the wolf jokes you would make if you saw me like this.” Rick said sadly as he continued to look at the night sky. “Where are you buddy?”


??? POV

How long have I been like this? Laying on the ground, unable to move, talk, or even cry. Minutes? Hours? Days? Weeks?! YEARS?!? I begin to cry though there were no tears cause I have no body and no one will be able to hear my sobs but me.

I then hear something, making me stop my crying and wonder what was that sound. It sounded like…footsteps?! YES! I was filled with joy that I tried calling out to the owner of the footsteps, but remembered I couldn’t talk, filling me with dread. ’Oh no! W-what if they d-don’t see me?! T-they’ll just walk r-right past me!!’ I thought in fear soon a shadow fell over me, snapping me out of my thoughts and look at the owner of the shadow.

They were humanoid in shape that much I can tell, but can’t see any other features as they were wearing a blood-red cloak, “Well well well, what do we have here?” the being, female by the sound of her voice, said as she kneeled down and picked me up. “The little mirror that rat has been looking for all these months? This must be my lucky day.”

’Rat? I-is she talking about Rick? Is s-she going to bring m-me to him?’ I thought in joy at the thought of being reunited with my friend again.

“You’ll certainly be useful later.” the woman said, placing me in a pocket of her cloak. Wait, what? She’s not going to bring me to Rick? Why?! Doesn’t she know he’s looking for me?! Or maybe she does. “I’ll make sure that little rat friend of yours suffers for a little while longer, little mirror.”

No….

NonononononononnoNO!!!

This can’t be happening!! I need to get free!! I have to!! But no matter how much I struggled, I couldn’t break free of my prison, causing me to be filled with even more dread as me and the woman headed off deeper into the forest.

’RICK!! HELP!!’

Comments ( 23 )

I mistook this for a parody earlier.

Please for the love of God, tell me this is a parody.

OR A TROLL! PLEASE, THIS HAS TO BE A TROLL!

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Hey, other people make their ocs op

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OP characters can work, this one doesn't. It's just a neverending cavalcade of how awesome he is, and the result is a story that breaks the cardinal sin of writing.

Its BORING.

Be bad. Be awesome. Be so awful you're something to gape at. But NEVER be boring. Mary Sues are boring. Here is the definition of a Mary Sue in your story.

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if you guys think its so bad, why u keep reading it?

you could just forget you ever saw this,

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Because you can do better.

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Because you can do better.

Comment posted by Daedrik deleted Dec 16th, 2020

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I... apologize for how I have previously acted I was needlessly mean spirited and I regret my actions.
Thank you and

Good bye

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I for one just found this and just read through all of it and can positively say 100%..it's up there in the good ones.

Not to go read a mlp sao story

Would've been nice to see more chapter

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i found this when i first read my first and favorite displaced story but if what i have seen from it is that yours might become my third second or even first favorite displaced story

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Wait really? You liked it that much?

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No just from what I read in another author's story that had this story as a link am waiting to see if it gets updated before I read it

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What story was it? Just asking out of curiosity

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Sorry was late when I saw that but it was the Equestrian anti-magic knight

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going to read the story after i finish the one i am one since it also lead to this it is the gamer one this time

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