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I was sent to a strange land full of talking, colorful ponies, with a wooden mask that once put on, grants me powers that let's me bend the very laws of physics.

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Comments ( 32 )

Alright, I liked the chapter, but so you know, your grammar needs some work, a editor would do, anyways, gonna read on

Alright, Grammer need work, but this was pretty good, especially since there are not any, or barely any, mask stories on fimfiction, anywho, I would like to see more, oh and here's a tip or two, I
Reread your story to check for spelling mistakes and such, and try to make chapters with more words, like have your chapters have atleast one k or two k words in each chapter

A displaced with the mask? Sweet, is it the comic one or the movie one is the question.

I want to see where this goes

OH JUST TRY AND STOP ME!!!!

Don't screw this one up and I might like you again.

Amazing story!!! Keep up the good work!!!👍👍👍

Great work can’t wait for next chapter

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i will get the popcorn

still waiting

A Discord that is more openly willing to murder?
It has possibilities, but there are many poor-writing traps to this too. Though, many of those traps largely depend on how long Discord is around.
But the bigger test is seeing what our Masked Man will be doing.
Only time will tell though, I suppose.

My email said there was a update where is it oh well hopefully there will be one soon because that would be ‘SMOKEN!’

I love the first mask movie the other was well shit

Death battle fight.

Please don't be an ass to the ponies in this one.

out discording discord nice

Great work keep it up

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And there's gonna be more chaos soon!!!

Cannot resist:

And for additional flair:

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I know so that makes 2 chaotic people beaten by the mask

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To be fair the comic mask is a murderer and psychopath

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Still its becoming a theme of his.

Well that happened

What happened to the 2000 word minimum that was required for a chapter? That was what it was like when I first signed up

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Wow now I feel kind cheated

Plan to continue the story?

thus The Mask have magic or powers

Re-Checking the fic... Did not read the fic before, but this is a copy of Death Battle, sadly, unlike Death Battle, Discord is not Deadpool and can return even with that

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