King Sombra returns to Equestria after a long banishment into the depths of the Frozen North. Twilight and the others are determined to help Sombra reform into a caring stallion. Sombra is hesitant with this offer at first, but soon begins to understand.
Story takes place sometime before season 9, only because I haven’t watched it yet.
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You have me intrigued! I like the pacing it's not very rushed and not slow like molasses in December. Can't wait to read more!
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I am trying my best to make it intriguing
Thank you!!
This looks like it has the potential to be really good! You’ve done a great job with the first chapter; will there be a schedule for chapter releases, or is just whenever they get done?
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Thank you!! I am so very happy to hear this! Chapters will be released at random dates!
liking it so far. will be watching it
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Thanks!!
Sounds like the guy got fuck all tortured out of him and then had the Celestial sisters mess with his head.
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Basically sums it all up
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Remind me how a mentally unstable person is at fault here? Especially since it sounds like whatever the sisters did made him like this.
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sorry If it seemed like I said that. The reason why he burst out into rage wasn’t caused by a mental disorder, it’ll be explained later into the story. However, Sombra has dealt with anxiety, hallucinations, etc previously. My bad if this is a little confusing, it is very late where I am at and I am not good at explaining xD
He isn’t at fault hahahaha
While yes, Tia did really fry his brain while knocking him out, it wasn’t intentional and she didn’t want to hurt him. The guards on the other hand, ehm... yeah.
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Don't fret. It was a rhetorical question and an easy way to weasel info out of you.
Due apologies for the attempt.
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Haha it’s okay xD
Will Radiant Hope appears, if I am not mistaken, she appears from the Umbrum prison near the Crystal Empire
Need more!
Combination of reforming seemingly-irredeemable evil and a dark theme of Sombra's weak mental state...
This could become a great rollercoaster of emotions!
proceeds to track the story
love it❤,can't wait for the rest!!
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Yep! She might appear in the story eventually! I have read the comics before haha. I'm using the fiendship is magic issue #1 and using it for Sombra's backstory.
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More soon to come
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It gives a lot of things to write about!
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Thanks!
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Nice, it's not something that I see being used around here with so many AUs and stuff
Oh, gotta love a good redemption story, especially for Sombra, I'm a sucker for those.
The fact I'm writing a story with a somewhat similar premise for Sombra helps as well, I actually love seeing similar ideas done.
I also must confess I joined the site almost immediately after seeing this story because I didn't want to seem like I was slightly copying yours, if that makes sense? Mine takes placeduringS9 though so it's not entirely the same but y'know, don't want to take chances.Okay confession aside I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Thank you! I was actually contemplating on giving up on this story so comments like these really motivate me. I will have to check your story out, too!
Is this twibra?l
I like it. I'll be waiting for more, definitely.
You have my attention can't wait for more.
I hope there is more soon. You have a really good start.
Hope to see this continued, it's a great start and has me hooked.
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just checkin in to see if this is alive