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Enjoyed most of the story. It's written pretty nice for a thing which sat on one's hardrive for a while...
The part with diapers is something which most authors usually warn about in the description, as far as I'm aware.
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True, but I only bother to list fetish content if I'm actually going to describe it in detail. In this story I just mention it in passing.
The point of the long description is to give the possible reader an idea as to whether or not it would be something they were interested in. This is especially the case when the story is no longer on the front page, where at least the short description can be found. Keep in mind, the long description does not necessarily be long, it just needs to give a basic rundown on what the story is.
That said, the bit that does describe the story does not seem completely accurate. This seems more like an exploration of Cadance's sexuality and kinks, and while Shining Armor is mentioned an a major portion of it, he's not the main focus. Yes it does talk about him, and from the perspective of Cadance, but it seems like that perspective and her opinions are more the intent than he is himself.
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Right, so yah, you're taking my rhetorical question waaayyy too literally! I was just being grumpy about it.
Also I'll describe my story however it feels like to me.