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Saatchi
Someone who forgot about ponies for years, but decided to come back when they started a particularly interesting pony project.
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I dont know why this story has so many dislikes
it was good i thuroly enjoyed it. Sequel?
1069976
The dislikes are probably from people who don't like the content, or just people disliking just for the sake of it. Don't know of any ideas to make a sequel yet, but I'll see what the future holds.
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the sequel could probably go one of two ways
the mature way, AJ gives them a punishment involving masochism forced sex etc
the non mature way is them trying to refix the bond between them and apologizing to spike.
im leaning towards scenario 2
1072454
I probably would have said the non mature way as well, but I'd probably allude to some sort of punishment though, just to link the two together. Then again, I might have to have some sex in it, because then I'd have both stories in different directories, and I want to keep this as a one off, and not add a second chapter to it.
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true. but why not both ways?
it be fun to read aj in a vindictive non rapist story
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It's rather late in the night at the moment, mind telling me what you mean by both ways?
>> Saatchi
You could do a sequel of what applejack did for the punishment?
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make two chapters.
one for each situation.
just make it seem like alternate scenario each
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Thanks!
And sometimes the best things are the ones you least expect.
1069976 I know, right!
What about their "punishment?"
If you could write a companion story in which a couple of mares do this (rape, macrophilia, etc) happens to Spike, that would be very satisfying. 'Cuz this was just f%^@ing dark.
1072454 1072682 APOLOGIZING to spike?? Are you fucking kidding me!? Two stallions just raped a child, that's a prison sentence!
1358419 i would actually prefer torture more than prison for rape.
and i agree with you buts its just a story maybe they could let spike beat them half to death
1361054 Now yer talkin If he can bite gems he can bit legs off. And he's a victim of rape, so he may not stop there. sounds good to me.
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maybe he can bite the organ they used to rape him with.
not only would it hurt but it would stop them from reproducing.
1363294 more importantly it would stop them from doing that same thing to anyone else.
1364670 true
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It'd be nice to know when those emotions surfaced, during your time reading the story.
And yeah, I never considered it to be rape, or at least I didn't meant for it to be rape.
Thank you foe your comment, and it's nice to know you'll be able reading some of my other works, even if I say that this is probably my superior piece, so far anyway.
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That's the last time I write a comment on my tablet. Damn auto corrections.
1572062 they pretty much surfaced whenever they felt like it. Three fourths of the time I was laughing so I couldn't really tell you.
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It's interesting that you found it funny, because I wasn't even trying for that.
1577602 I found it funny because I mean come on, who wouldn't laugh at a dragon turned purple blob stuck between two ponies that are just gettin' it on? I know I did.
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I see how that works now.
Applejack should totally give them hell for what they did to Spike!!!!!