• Member Since 31st Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen May 28th, 2021

Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

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Why is Fluttershy so shy? Some ponies are just born shy. Some gain it. But what if Fluttershy isn�¢ï¿½ï¿½t really shy? What if she�¢ï¿½ï¿½s shy to protect herself, because she�¢ï¿½ï¿½s never sure if somepony is helping him? The only way to protect herself is to stay away from others. But she failed to do that, and is an Element of Harmony. But even the Elements of Harmony can't stop him. And now, she has to leave Ponyville before her friends get hurt...
But it's already too late...

(SLENDERMANE) I am disappointed in myself for writing this...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

I didn't really pre-read it at all, but I think it's... alright...:unsuresweetie:
Not my best work...

Got potencial. Keep writing. :twilightsmile:

Yes i would like to see more, keep at it and always try to pre-read i did see a few errors but not too many. :raritystarry:

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WHY DOES EVERYONE LIKE THIS?!?!?:unsuresweetie::rainbowhuh::derpyderp2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::rainbowderp:
I THOUGHT IT WAS TERRIBLE!
AND I CREATED IT!!!

I DOOOOOOOOOONNN'T KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!

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New episode coming next Wednesday maybe, but probably Friday!

Need More, please?

Just so you know: I cancelled this.
I'm continually getting PM's telling me to update it.

nooooooooooooo. y!!! oh god why!!!!! this was so good!!!!!! you were the chosen one!!!!!! :fluttershbad: :raritydespair::raritycry:

1218534 NO! IT WAS A TERRIBLE IDEA!
BUTT, if someday, I can get more than fifteen requests FROM DIFFERENT PEOPLE, I will continue it.

You should continue this. Great idea very different from most stories on here.

1063023 I'm bored today, so I'm gonna piss you off with this pointless comment reply from 4 months ago:trollestia:.
That is just how bored I am.:pinkiehappy:

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