• Published 30th Mar 2019
  • 4,816 Views, 28 Comments

Taking Your Prize - DarkRyu



Princess Luna is the mare of your dreams. You confess your feelings to her, but she just wants to remain friends. At first you feel hurt and rejected, but you’re going to do whatever it takes to take your prize.

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more sleepy chapters, please

“I have to be in court in an hour!” She exclaimed, flying out of bed. “I’m sorry, Anon, but I must prepare!”

No offense, but why does she have to be in court? I thought royal figures never had to testify or be prosecuted (although I am writing a story where Twilight Sparkle goes on trial for treason). Is she just there to watch, like in "The People's Court"?

...or is she suing Anon for sexual assault?

“My mind is wandering too much tonight.” She said. “I’ve postponed my court until tomorrow.”

OK, so is Luna the judge? No offense, but wouldn't it be awkward for the person judging your case to also be the one who can dissolve parliament, veto any legislation, and declare war against any other country?

“I saw it in your dreams.” She said, propping herself up a bit. “At first, I thought it was just a subconscious desire of yours, but when I probed deeper, I realized that it was a memory. Then I thought back to the time I had fallen asleep so suddenly and I knew that was when you had done it.”

So whose dreams can Luna enter and what can she do while there?

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Hmmm... would death by death spell squad be an order?

Can't wait for more chapters. love the story so far

So... this is a nice short story, but could definitely use a nice one-shot followup, anyway, great work and will be putting this on tracking!

please update. loved the story so far.

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I'm glad you liked it! I probably won't update this story, but I might write a sequel. You might want to watch me to make sure you get notified if I do decide to write a continuation of this story.

I honestly enjoyed this story, it was short, simple, and sweet. The whole rape thing didn't even bother me either. If anything, I believe it added to it. Great job dude! 👍

V8

UPDATE PLS

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Wrong kind of court. She has royal night court, essentially a royal duty to listen to the goings on of the kingdom, commerce, and community and act upon them. It's a pretty common aspect of royalcentric stories especially regarding MLP where the Princesses are expected to give a dang about the citizens.

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