I write fetish clopfics and other things. Commissions: Not Open, working on existing commissions.
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Most dowbthumbs on a story like this are due to content.
While I do not care for the story premise. That is not what earned a downthumb from me. Rather I suggest to the author to get 1-3 editors on his team. The story jumps from 1st to 3rd person randomly, there are many grammatical errors. All would have been caught by a editor.
Simple, but effective.
geez 39 dislikes? thats a little harsh
this is a fine story, a bit short, but fine :)
I agree good story but too short....I woudl like to see something more long term with Celesta....that guard I like.
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I have gotten editing assistance from Kiernan and have since published the revised chapter to replace the original.