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EntropyEntropy


IDGAF. Enjoy my unique brand of stuff you can't show your parents.

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I am equally afraid of both outcomes of reception to this story. Lol.

You're not supposed to share the link of NSFW cover art anywhere around here.

Dude...:pinkiesick:

11254912
Thanks for the heads up, simply shared the artists name then.

Sidenote: looks like nobody has any actual complaints about the story aside from the content so far, so I call that a complete win.

11254914
Thumbed you up, also lol I understand.

11254923
That's a healthy way to look at things. One of the factors that stop me from writing for this site is seeing how shitty people can act when it comes to sexuality. So I respect you for writing anyway

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Thanks, to be fair though, its hard to imagine this kinda story being that liked to begin with, so that kinda makes it easy to roll with the objections. I had no contradictions in my mind about the idea of people not liking this.

That being said, The chapter after this one is what I'm really looking forward to, if these people who hate it stick around, they'll hate the next chapter far more.

Also obviously there's going to be people who really like it, those people will love sticking around. Also some small part of me thinks some of the people who get mad at it enjoy their anger on some level.

♡ the fat bastard theme! This was enjoyable ^^

11255057
More fat bastard to come, stay tuned.

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There's an enigmatic energy to this, "meh".

11255329
You say that to everything. Zero impact or meaning. Standards, a reader of MLP fanfics have not.

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Ah, that's a little disappointing, I liked the idea of the duality behind his statement where he thought it could've gone harder, or that just wasn't his thing, both way different meanings from the other.

Well you're not the hero we wanted but the hero we needed. I agree there is very little fat or ugly bastard content. That and bimbo vacation is the two I enjoy the most. I'm happy you're out here doing fastest work

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To be fair, I wouldn't say fastest, been hit by covid so I didn't feel like writing for a while, this probably won't be done until I feel less sick. I call this IRL karma which hit me rather immediately funny enough.

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Aight, lotta BS happened in quick succession, but tomorrow I should be able to work on this again, or today, I'm going to sleep but its 12:00 A.M. Lol.

Also as of this edit, I edited the first chapter very slightly, changes were making the liquids coming out of smolder white with a tint of red to symbolize that she lost her virginity, removing the extra "soon" related to Sludge blowing his load, and adding extra details to the end of the chapter to better accentuate how rough Sludge was on Smolder, like having Smolder struggling to use her legs, and Twilight trying just a teeny bit harder to reach out to Smolder.

Also adding extra bits of joy to Sludge examining what he did to Smolder, cause obviously he would like what he's done if he was a true bastard, even if it wasn't a complete victory with Smolder's lack of crying.

Also adding the detail that Sludge is fully captured, not just left unconscious until the next chapter.

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Nice ! Looking forward to it.
Also, besides your thumbnail art I found two other Sludge/Smolder artworks, and I dont know if you have anything planned based on those.

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I know the ones, where she's obviously begrudged into it, and nah, I feel like blackmail is just watering down what these things go for, which is domination, and I don't like half measures that try to reach a wider audience, cause then they're not as liked by those who are actually looking for it in the first place.

Some feel that making others feel like they have no choice is just as much domination as the physical kind, but like.... A thought breaks them away in that case is how I see it. Plus they're not really struggling at that point, which is part of the whole attraction of rape, which is basically the ultimate form of "one side does whatever it wants to the other."

Made a small edit, since chronologically, Sludge shows up BEFORE the tree of harmony is destroyed and later turned into the treehouse of harmony, so its the TREE of harmony right now. I WILL make this the story I continue, there's not enough Sludge dominating Smolder, OR Fat bastard content to give up on this....

As well as enough content for the plot of the whole story I have in mind considering the implication of a certain artifact, even though this is the harder bit to write for a lotta reasons.

Cant wait to see what happens to Ember.

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