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Yessir! I'll get right on it :D
What's the thought process of "Hey some random creature showed up let's drug it!" If he wasn't sapient or even if he was he'd pretty pissed off if that didn't work and considering he fell from space the normal though process would suggest it's at least extremely durable. Not to mention what's the idea of dragging said creature BACK INTO THEIR SETTLEMENT!? Hey, if it's sentient let's treat it like a fucking animal, not to mention he was literally compared to an ursa! Why the hell would you bring anything remotely similar anywhere near anyone. If this kid just passively accepts what they've done to him I'm out.
Otherwise decent writing and good premise, regardless of my overly biased rant.