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Just a short story about an immortal and her loved one, told in nothing but conversations only.

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EverfreePony #1 · Feb 17th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Interesting short read, leaving a lot to the readers’ imagination. Assuming Twilight is the caretaker, I’m not sure if the clever mare would really think that water and apples can lower the fever... but the story itself was still enjoyable

locke_jaw #2 · Feb 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree with you on the fever part...I think it needs more water and more apples.

EverfreePony #3 · Feb 17th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Well, that’d be an intriguing scientific experiment

Starlight Nova #4 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 1 · ·

With all the apples in this story, I'm surprised Applejack herself doesn't appear in this story.

locke_jaw #5 · Feb 21st, 2019 · · ·

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Even though I only mentioned her once in the story, you can actually tell her fate in that one sentence. Also, thanks for reading!

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