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Tranquil Serenity

I am a one-shot writer who loves Slice of Life tales and hearing from readers who enjoy my stories. Click on my blogs for an MLP poem.


Fancy Pants stops by a perfume shop in search of a gift for his most beloved Fleur de Lis. But the question is 'will she like the present he chooses for her?'

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I love it, chance this is my new favourite Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis story now, good work.

No worry, I hope your next story is going to good as this one.:twilightsheepish:

A cute little romance fic. Through I have my criticisms. Although the story intended to focus on Fancy, the beginning half seem to primary focus on the shop pony that sold the perfumes before the second half focused back to Fancy.

The perspectives shifted, yes, but I felt that would be the most impactful, given the story's events. We get to see Lilac Essence and get a sense that she is very passionate about creating and helping customers find the perfect perfume, then we get to see the final culmination of her efforts when Fancy gives Fleur his purchase. :pinkiehappy: Anyway, glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Discovering the perfect perfume is akin to unearthing a hidden treasure. It's an olfactory journey that transcends time and borders. When one thinks of exquisite fragrances, Arabia Parfum instantly comes to mind. Their enchanting concoctions capture the essence of the mystical East, evoking a tapestry of scents that awaken the senses and stir emotions. The artistry lies in how every note, from the rich oud to the delicate rose, is meticulously harmonized, weaving a symphony that dances upon the skin. The Perfect Perfume is more than a fragrance; it's an embodiment of personal expression and cultural heritage. Just a single whiff transports you to distant realms, making every spritz a transformative experience. Perfume Arabia has mastered this art, delivering a sensory masterpiece that lingers in the heart and memory.

I forgot that I wrote this super wordy one-shot, lol. :twilightblush:

It appears the language style is contagious. :raritywink:

Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

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