What. The. Fuck?

Well, now that RD's dead, what now?

Scoots went crazy.
Crazy.

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I don't know, I was thinking about continuing it for one more chapter but I feel it would be best to leave it as it is.

How is she going to after taking her wings off attach all the tendens of rainbow dashs wings that control movment without help.

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Cupcakes did nothing for me, I have yet to find a gore story that has freaked me out.
Also what exactly didn't you get?

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Oh my bad.
Cupcakes is alright. It just didn't freak me out but I would still suggest it.

Im sorry I hate this story cuz im a Rainbow Dash Fan but.... i have to admit you did good on the gore and that idea of knocking dash out with the sandbags classic Acme Stunt and the slitting of the throat and all that.... it was really in good detail. I sugest you like start making like Wherepony stuff you would be really good with the gore factor and please give it a good ending and no death to mane six ponys or ask me for a list of ponys to kill and not kill if you do... P.S. Cupcakes freaked me out... so yeah im not hating im giving advice :X You should have killed trixie :D none cares for her XD make like her someone like idk... Simon Sail (cutie mark is a sail boat) and have him look up to trixie and then trixies mean to him so he kills here i would love that make sure to have lots of blood and gore!

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I like kill the characters people love...
I'm a horrible person that way.
Also I don't think I will be doing another gore story for a long time.

To be honest, I'd ramp up the rating to mature and add the gore tag. I had to bail out when I saw it going where it did...

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I thought I put the gore tag there...
Odd well I will go do that now.

1083156 To be honest, I hadn't realised that the gore tag wasn't displayed any more until much later.

Sorry for the bother.

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It's alright, I changed the rating to mature as well.
Thanks for the heads up.

..........Psicosis will you marry me?

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It appears you liked this story and I'm glad to hear that.
If you want my hand in marriage you will have to work harder for it.

P.S If you enjoyed this story you also might like my new one.
Two sides of the same coin. If you read it please do let me know what you think of it.

1091847 I was kidding about the marriage part. I actually really like the gore. Almost so anatomically correct. :megusta:

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I knew you were kidding, I was simply playing along.
I'm glad you enjoyed the gore.

I don't understand what the picture has to do with any of this......

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I really couldn't find anything better...
I guess you could think it was what Scootaloo felt like?

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I think I saw a picture that would fit this story perfectly, I just don't know where. I also have a picture (Not mine) with Scootaloo painting herself like Rainbow Dash. Would that be better?

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Yeah it would be.

“Any last words?”
( Pinkie busts down door.)

"Thats my job...... IM SUPPOSE TO KILL RAINBOW DASH GET YOUR OWN STORY!"

With that scootaloo gets sliced in half by a chainsaw and Pinkie finishes off Rainbow and as the climax ends the story Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo respawn five minutes later only to have a nuke destroy ponyville. Both pegasi are dead Pinkie realized she was in the wrong story and no pony has a happy ending......Thats a fucked up way to end a gore fic but what do i know i was the one who dropped the bomb and destroyed ponyville...Why? CAUSE I CAN!

THE END!

NOW THIS is what I am talking about..... bit vague on if she gets away with her murder of Rainbow Dash.... but I love this. This site, (in my head at least) needs more corrupted CMC stories. Scootaloo also makes a better psychotic killer then Pinkie. (ironically, I haven't fully read Cupcakes. I DID HOWEVER read the last 3 paragraphs, and 3 alternate endings. While Pinkie was slightly in character, pointless torture is meaningless without some kind of motive. I think Cupcakes would have been 50% better received if a more plausible reason for Pinkie to kill Dash came up. This could have already been explained, I only read the last 3 paragraphs)

While it was a little upsetting that Dash is sorry (THEY ARE ALWAYS SORRY ON THEIR DEATH BED) midway through her murder, it is cheered up slightly that Scootaloo is killing her.

On an unrelated note: I wish there would be AJ is a killer stories out there. It seems to me that the completed stories out there have her a victim. Is it really that hard to corrupt the Element of Honesty? We have corrupted Fluttershy for Celestia's sake, why not AJ. The closest I can come to her being a villain is that one story I read forever ago by Streak the Fox where AJ rapes Spike. Come on people if you can make an insane Pinkie, WHY THE BUCK CAN'T YOU MAKE A PSYCHOTIC APPLEJACK

I am 100% aware that these weird comments shouting for kid characters or honest and hard working individuals becoming hard core killers is weird and maybe this says something about me, but dammit, I like the CMC and for ages I had dreams of taking over the world (like a videogame with powers) and maybe these power stories are getting to me

Well written, what else you got?

Wellp that was a story