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This story is a sequel to Like Sisters


Sequel to "Technicolor Dreams" and "Like Sisters". Rainbow Dash has adopted Scootaloo as her little sister, getting her out of the horrible orphanage she had been in. However, her efforts to keep Scootaloo with her are far from over. She will have to work very hard to make sure Scootaloo gets everything she needs.

Meanwhile, other events are happening behind the scenes, as Rainbow Dash's actions start a chain of events that could lead all of Equestria to an unknown destiny, as truths of its past are finally revealed...from the lips of the only one to have been there since the very beginning, who is anything but what he seems.

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Sequel to "Technicolor Dreams" and "Like Sisters".

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 287 )

First... This gonna be good.:pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you think so.

Wow...my story rates a first.

Ha I just had to read the first two before reading tis one even though the first on in the 'series? Had nothing to do with this

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Actually, they have very much to do with each other.
In "Technicolor Dreams" it's revealed that Rainbow Dash is adopted (which she knows) and Soarin and Spitfire are her birth parents (which she doesn't know). Those two things are going to have a rather major effect on the flow of this story.

1836336 oh awesome
What's inside RD's dream door???

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...Something that nearly happened to her, but thanks to FLuttershy seeing she was in trouble and fetching her dad (an OC who will appear later in this story), it didn't happen. The almost, however, still left Rainbow Dash somewhat scarred. It's part of the reason she never sought a coltfriend.

...I'd rather not get any more specific.

Meh it's ok :pinkiehappy:

Soo I'm gonna guess it involved a colt??

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It happened when she was a filly, before getting her Cutie Mark...and it involved a stallion.

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Almost, yes.

That's why she reacted so strongly in "Like Sisters" to Candy Cane. She had a feeling regarding his...proclivities, one Luna confirmed for her.

Ahhh right so Candy Cane raped some of the orphans :rainbowderp:
That sick bastard
PINKIE IS PISSED
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Is this where I should point out the tail end of Derpy and RD's conversation, or would that be too much?

btw, there's already a VERY long line to do massive damage to Candy Cane.

Awww :pinkiesad2: but I as gonna torture him until he begs for death then I'll just leave him to wallow in his own pain and pitty and listen to his sobs for help that will never be answered :pinkiecrazy:

this is why derpy is best pony:derpytongue2:

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Maybe someone should make a flash game where you can beat up Candy Cane in various ways...then just as he's on the brink of death, death shows up and offers you the choice of death or full heal for him.
Also, maybe having him run from Slenderpony.

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Derpy is good Mom.

:rainbowlaugh: that would be fun

very heartfelt and full of feels chapter i loved it

I concur with that guy I

Very heartwarming :heart:

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Amen to that!

:fluttercry: that was An amazing chapter. Not since my little Dashie have I had any feeling while reading a story. thankyou:rainbowdetermined2:

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Wow, that's high praise. Thank you very much.

Nice you really know how to write a good story.:scootangel:

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Words too, please?

1900459 sorry ( I know how much words help when it comes to comments on your story, like when people give me very little feedback on my story for example) it was really awsome and gave me mixed feelings, but all of them good. Keep doing what you are doing because what you are writing is awsome.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Thank you for your feedback. As far as mixed emotions, this is definately the fic to give them to you.

1901041 thanks though if you get the chance could you read my fan fic and give feed back on it? I get very little other than likes or dislikes so it would be nice if someone could tell me what I need to improve on.

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I'm sorry, I would love to give you feedback, but...
I'm unusually sensitive to horror genre stories, which has - unfortunately - led me to avoid Dark genre fics, and - given the reference to "Rainbow Factory" - I'm actually afraid to read it.

1901166 well technicly My OC is destroying the Rainbow Factory if that helps. Granted it is dark but not as dark as the original Rainbow Factory. But I understand. I used to stay away from Dark stories as well. But then I decided instead of shying away from them, how about a hero steps forth and destroys them? A glimmer of light in a Dark World.:rainbowdetermined2:

anyways thanks for the consideration.

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While that does help, mostly the problem is that dark stories give me nightmares I can't escape.
I saw the first Matrix movie over 15 years ago. I still have nightmares about that freaky metal octopus thing that was cutting into their ship at the end of the movie. Don't even want to think about the nightmares I might have if I read anything Rainbow Factory related...or worse, Cupcake related.

1901663 if you don't mind me asking, I have to understand. Why are you Writing something that says Dark on it yet you don't like Dark stories?

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Because there isn't a Horror tag instead. This is a dark story, but not a horror story. I don't read anything horror.

That Admaral Bloodmane reminds me of

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what about workmares comp she was injured on the job because of somepony's screw up

EDIT: oh and I am sure that scootaloo will have something to say about RD cutting off her wings as well as the rest of her friends

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Worker's Comp will cover any medical procedures she needs and provide a small amount of wage-based funds. However, she's still stuck in the hospital for a month and unable to take care of Scootaloo for that time. Doesn't look good on paper at all.
And yes, Scootaloo would have a lot to say...assuming she gets the chance.



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If you're interested, here's the full profile for my OCs of Fluttershy's parents.
http://fav.me/d5o52r8

What has that got to do with Admaral Bloodmane???

1903941 yes that is true that she herself won't be able to look after scoots but RD has an amazing support system set up where in the case of an emergency, like the current situation, scootaloo will have all the care, love and support she needs and then some; then coupled with everything that she has done for her prior to the injury and you have something that does look good on paper.

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Except that what now appears on paper is that Rainbow's job is too dangerous...at least that's how Rainbow interprets it from what she's learned. The system's a bit more complicated than that, but at the same time much more simple. I won't go into full details, but the way the system currently is set up, if Rainbow is absent from home for two weeks straight and isn't bringing in any more money (since worker's comp would come in one sum like a paycheck) and her savings drop below what's considered a danger level (which they will based on standard expenses) during her first year as a guardian (the probationary period), then she'll be deemed unfit as a guardian to Scootaloo. The system is cruel in this case, but it's set up from centuries ago - imposed by Celestia herself - in order to protect adopted orphans from exploitave or neglectful guardians.

Damn that took a dark turn... But I still love the story.:raritystarry::twilightoops::pinkiesick::pinkiehappy::scootangel:

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Yes, this is where the dark tag kicks in.
I'm glad you stillenjoy it.
Next chapter should go up today or tomorrow...

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Niether is mine. Mine is about rising up against those horros with a bad ass dud who isn't afraid of anything. He fights to reveal what goes on in the facotry taking out all horrors along the way. (Rainbow dash and scootaloo are in this and he does come across both) and unlike most horror stories this one will have a happy ending. May not be Rainbows and Butterflys but it will be happier than most Dark stories. Give it a try. It is mostly about action and eventually scootaloo and RD. also there is some gore but not really in a horrific way just in more of the stallion riping apart the evil workers.

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Alright, I will add it to my read it later...and make sure to read it well away from bedtime.

And so the backround of scootaloo shall be found and on this day shit will go down

The liker wuz here :heart:

Nice way to save rainbows wings.:scootangel::rainbowkiss:

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