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Well, its official. This is one of the greatest stories I've ever come across. You killed my feelings, brought me to tears, and continuously have me on the edge of my seat. Seriously, the hell is Dead by Daylight? Cause this thing seems to be a real motivator for you. Other than that...
..really am glad I found Dead by Sunset... even if it is a bit fucked up. Peoples life's be hard and this just opens my mind a little to that.
YOU just make me wanna go in there and hug every last character from the show. Damn you. You terrific pen-written writer.
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Dead by Daylight is one of my favorite games, it's on steam. If you've read all of Dead by Sunset then I've partially taught you how to play the game already. 4 players as survivors versus 1 player as a Killer. I have several hundred hours in it.
I'll go ahead and comment on both of the siren fics here since I'm gonna be talking about them both in combination. And from what I've read of all your works so far, I do believe that I love how you write the Sirens the most.
There is just something instantly engaging about the way you write the sirens that makes me love them, and if it wasn't already obvious I am absolutely in love with your Aria. You also weren't kidding when you said these were some of your best works and I will readily stand by that as well, there wasn't a moment during either of these stories where I wasn't fully engaged in what was going on or about to happen.
Adagio's story does a good job of capturing her feelings of falling in love in short order extremely well, and gives an extremely believable reason for the person she does with. You don't need to see a lot of their romance to feel it, but it also doesn't happen instantly and builds up to them together, and Timber fills in the lonely gaps Adagio has without her sisters around. And then when tragedy strikes it makes sense it would break her to that point, requiring the love that only family can bring to fix her.
Sonata's is also just sad, since you know full well she went there with the intent of helping people while also earning her citizenship. And then of course, things go terribly, terribly wrong because humans. Where as with Adagio you see the horror play out, you have to imagine the horror that Sonata has been going through all these years and just how much damage it did to her. I was almost a little surprised you didn't show Sonata recovering from the trauma and just left that conclusion to being made in Dead by Sunset to begin with. I also love that with Equestrian magic being real, some ghosts truly do exist.
I honestly feel like I'd love to see some more snippets of Siren history written by you in the future. Maybe as its own series or even attached to another, but I could see you writing a whole interesting universe of lives the characters have lived and done in their times, especially since you often made them live very similar lives to my own. I've started doing that with one of my own fics, and this really is just spurring me on to want to write more for it.
So yes, extremely high praise from me on these, they are most definitely some of your best. I personally still like Rules of Engagement more, but these together come in a very competitive second place~
PS. A little sad Aria never got one, but then again she got to premiere in the fic these two were inspired from, so it balances out a little heh
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. Doing Siren historical snippets might be a fun future project, but I have something else sort of in the works that'll be in an author note at the end of Featherfall tomorrow.
I'm really glad you enjoyed both of those stories. Honestly, Sisterhood is slightly below Lament, in my opinion, but Engagement is my newest and most polished so color me totally unsurprised that it's significantly better
As for an Aria story set along this timeline... maybe I will at that.
So many emotions, I like it, a great addition to continuity.
Wow see ngl this plays itself to the nurses backstory so well a kind soul wanting to heal but where’s the nurses mind broke and she chose to free the victims of crotus penn sonatas is her anger her rage manifested no wonder the entity grabbed her as a killer first and split her and her rage apart and it makes more sense why aria is saying I’m sorry I’m so sorry she’s blaming herself for letting sonata go alone and what happened to break her kind spirit
For a moment, I thought you meant she was using a stiletto heel to fight. It really strikes me as something Adagio would do.
This was a really good follow-up, and it certainly didn't feel like the word count it was. The penny dreadful style horror is played really well here, and I'm surprised that Sonata was not the one orchestrating it, which was a good twist to have. This is also one of the more unique and fleshed out reasons I've seen as to why Sonata is so dim, and it makes so much sense.