This is set in the same universe as "The true Psychopath". It will not feature The Psychopath directly.
Personal tags: Creepy, Mysterious.
One day, as Luna is sleeping, she receives a message in her sleep from entities even higher than her and Celestia. Even higher than Father Time and Death! These two entities warn her of an imposing doom to the whole world as she knows it. If she does not hurry up, then there could be a catastrophe brought about quite soon, one that even Psycho would not be able to prevent or repair with the Illogic as all energies and powers stem from that which the Doomsday creature comes from.
This time, however, only Luna knows, and this "pony" is going to a new land, one that is much bigger and packed than Ponyville. It will be up to Luna and two unlikely friends, a stallion and a diamond dog, to stop this harbringer of doom. But...is it really a pony, or is there something hidden deeper than we know? There's also a red and white hidden in plain sight, but who will learn the existence of this delight? And will the diamond dog stop fumbling through the trash? Only time will tell.
hmmm very interesting story cant wait for next chapter
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Wat, wat,wat,wat,wat,wat,wat.
Dumb bitch spammer. I DUN BLOCKED YO 'N DELETED YO COMMENT!
In the nicest way possible, you need a proofreader/editor. I would volunteer, but I'll be out on anesthesia in roughly 15 minutes, so I won't be able to help all day...
1187541 I wrote that long before I finished the chapter. It's a bit normal that it isn't as polished as the rest. I wike when you make cwitics.
Well....now I'm even more interested in this!
Thanks for another awesome chapter, Psycho!
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Somehow I didn't really like this chapter. I don't know why, maybe it's the pacing, it feels like you just shoved two characters in my face. Whilst the first scene with destitute was okay, although the destruction of the town seemed a little sudden, but that may be what you were going for. The second scene with Mond felt like it was haphazardly thrown in, and the griffin's reaction seemed a little over the top although that could be the general attitude of griffins. Over all I think it was missing a lot of background story, but I expect you to add that later in when Luna sets out for her adventure.
1291944 Who do you think Mond is?
Mond is German for?
>>The Psychopath
I feel slightly foolish
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Also, don't forget what the griffin was. Those parts of society tend to feel "superior" to others.
My reply to The Nothing about existance being a tumor.
Too much OC.... not enough JUSTICE!
But I like this story, except the part where everypony in certain places never existed.
1294613 Such is the way of the nothing. You're not meant to like it.
I keep meaning to read this but then get sidetracked. No longer! This is not leaving my tabs bar until it is read!
This is great, I apologize for not reading it earlier.
That white changeling entrance was extremely creepy. At least now it is canon in one of your stories! I really hope I don't put off reading more when you post it.
I have to agree with 1320734. The sapien looks to be quite an interesting character. However, i cant agree entirely with his opinion on the changeling. While it did seem off, it was still done very well. Bleah, i have no clue what im saying.
Oh nooooooes....
Why do you write these things and make them all hard to read?!
1342282 It's just you that has a hard time reading them.
1342533 WHY? NONE OF IT MAKES SENSE, RANDOM THINGS HAPPENING, CHARACTERS CHANGING NAMES AND ATTITUDES, random creatures from nowhere, and people/ponies all talking gibberish or with the bad grammerz!
1342537 Just you.
Let's try this a second time.
Good chapter.
Very short comment.
1349834 You bastard.
1349860Me bastard! Wait... what?
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That what I was thinking too.
Quick! Give Princess Celastia a new name!
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okay... lets try this again, but with feeling. ACTION!
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Better.
...how do you pronounce that?
Cool. Now I will take this name, copyright it, then make a story.
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I'd said that as a joke, but i'll think about doing it.
Also, please check out my story, as the title character will have a cameo in Psychopath's sequel.
0_0 they that crazy?
1361923No. It's just because their powers would qualify them as heralds, that, and their powers come from...ask Samaru where they come from.
1186121 I thought you were watching this story? You lie?!
1392604 I finished this at midnight, so my fingers were flying. And no, the two weren't overacting. If they cannot find what they need, they erase. What happened to the town where the Dorammo appeared? Destitute preferred to destroy it to leave the erasing to the Nothing.
1395094 Seeing as there is only one chapter left for this story, I'm going to go ahead and finish the first chapter of Psycho's sequel and post it in advance.
1428602 Ah! That's the thing! Where is it and what is it doing? Maybe it was that white beast? Perhaps. However, this is still Psycho's world, and seeing as it has a better form of communication than anything else, perhaps it is waiting, hoping to plan its next move. This time, I didn't forget to use a character.
I don't even have to zoom in to see what you wrote in tiny.
I don't know... While I do love the story, I just feel as if i'm being left out of the loop somehow. It isn't as if you haven't given the characters backgrounds or anything... I don't know maybe I just need to reread this after it's over. *Shrug*
Personally, this story isn't as good as Psychopath. It lacks a lot of charm and character that the other had. This might be due to the darker tone, but that's not really an excuse. Other than Pencil Box, none of the characters had any sort of charm to them, though I can tell you really tried. Also, I grow tired of the whole 'super powerful thing from yada-yada tries to destroy all universes because blah blah blah' kind of villain/force.
The white changeling seemed to me like a useless character, as he didn't really do anything. And as for the Destitute being the father, it seemed a tad forced, but definitely not foreseeable.
One thing I liked was the city of Duchess: a rotten, torn, hell-hole where species intermix and shady characters thrive. For some reason I really like those kinds of places, and you did it quite well.
I did think that this story had potential, but then other stories
took priority. But for now, I'm kinda glad that it's done and you can work the big story. 
The Master of Metallicato,
BludgeonWarrior.
1429470 I have trouble when it comes to working with several characters, and I agree about the white changeling. While I did have something planned for him, I forgot it along the way.
Well... this took too long to get to. And I do have to say that while this chapter did show signs of being finished in a hurry, I actually enjoyed this one more. I don't really have a way to explain it but it just felt more... complete than the others.
1432781 You feel that it is complete and incomplete. THE ILLOGIC!
Done! I have to say that while I still remain confused on a few parts that I will probably get on subsequent readings, I loved the story. The music you chose was fantastic and it playing during the reveal that destitute was Pencil's father almost brought a tear to my eye. I give it a 8.2 of 10 and 2 grilled cheese sandwiches.
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Could you elaborate on his non-existent role?
1434519 I'll PM you.
suspensful, i must say
5 out of five stars from me!
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Oh wow. Someone still reads these old stories? Sorry that it doesn't reflect my current skills, though.
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Taking inspiration?