A surely weak and helpless stallion is living on the edge of the Everfree. Twilight and co. attempt to rescue him and herd him under the safety of mares. Said stallion happens to like the sound of herding, but he'll not say it outright. (RGRE)
After a long day of college classes, it is nice to come home to see a new chapter to a story come out, only to find that it ends with a nut busting climax that just leaves some poor soul coated in not-ectoplasm with a surprise visit from two ponies who was seeking that liberating creamy facial. Bravo good sir!
"So, like, are you new to this, or something?" Jason asked, all semblance of tact surely out the window with that utterance.
"Pfft, of course I have!" Rainbow laughed, and it sounded as if she was telling the truth. "And every stallion I've been with has loved it, I'll have you know!"
I think Rainbow's responding to a different question here
twilight thought nothing could shake her rock steady friendship with rainbow dash but it turned out all it took was one rock hard dick to come between them
How far do you plan on taking this story? Do you plan for it just to be a small short story, or are you planning to make it into a full story with a developed plot and everything?
The moment he finished until she opened the door was the most amazing and graphic description of what happened I've ever read related to that event. The image of her with a content smile (and ***) will be in my minds eye for the rest of my life, thank you!💜
"Okay, well either they've been too scared to tell you the truth, or their cocks have been made out of vibranium, because that isn't how you suck dick." Could he take it a little further? Fuck it, he needed to drive the point home. "It felt as if you were trying to suck the marrow out of my cock, and there isn't even any bone in there. I've always wondered what it might feel like to fuck a vacuum cleaner, I think I just found the answer. I'm lucky my throat isn't located in my penis, or I'd have brain damage by now."
This. This is perhaps the best paragraph ever written in the english language. I haven't laughed this hard in so long...thank you for that.
I am loving this series. I particularly love how you p direct attention toward the reversed gender roles of Equestria, so few fics actively pursue that Avenue of writing. I can’t wait for more
And now we wait for the confrontation between Twilight n Fluttershy against Rainbow Dash covered in nut cream, I wonder how well those two are going to take it that their slothful friend beat them to the punch of getting some action with their mysterious stallion friend.
,,, never before have I been in a position where I'm actually just scrolling through the porn with a smile on my face- not for the porn, but for the enevitable reaction that will come of it.
damn looks like that three way is gonna happen sooner then I thought
The nut was not the only thing busted that day...
BEGONE THOT
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the Omnissiah decrees to retrieve the power dildos
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Only three?
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Or four way if Dash joins in
It's funny cause it made sense, small male population, dicks-for-brains females with little to no action.
Don't even know how to do a blow job *Slow clap*
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Wow. Didn't even think of that. Bravo.
After a long day of college classes, it is nice to come home to see a new chapter to a story come out, only to find that it ends with a nut busting climax that just leaves some poor soul coated in not-ectoplasm with a surprise visit from two ponies who was seeking that liberating creamy facial. Bravo good sir!
I think Rainbow's responding to a different question here
Insta-favorited!
Loving this story. Hopefully, you'll decide to turn it into a full story.
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That first line was originally the current chapter title, fuck up on my part that I'll fix soon. Thanks for pointing it out!
I was just thinking about this story when got home. Happy that you updated, can't wait to read more!
This story is incredibly crude, rude, sexist and obnoxious, but it's also ridiculous enough to be entertaining as heck. Well done.
>inb4 next chapter is a three way
Damn that was good.
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Dammit
Clueless Rainbow is kinda fucking hot.
As Tony the Tiger says, "They're Grrrrrrrrrrrrreat!!!!!!!!"
I loved this!! Cant wait for more.
Hell yes, to the Rainblow job!
Technically kept his end of the deal.
totally worth the wait.
10 points to the Author
The Monk
twilight thought nothing could shake her rock steady friendship with rainbow dash but it turned out all it took was one rock hard dick to come between them
How far do you plan on taking this story? Do you plan for it just to be a small short story, or are you planning to make it into a full story with a developed plot and everything?
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Words...
The moment he finished until she opened the door was the most amazing and graphic description of what happened I've ever read related to that event. The image of her with a content smile (and ***) will be in my minds eye for the rest of my life, thank you!💜
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"Cum between them"
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I've got a feeling he's gonna take it a step further and make fucking series out of this good shit.
I officially love this story and can't wait for more(no rush)Ihope he meets the others soon.
This. This is perhaps the best paragraph ever written in the english language. I haven't laughed this hard in so long...thank you for that.
This isn't finished yet , but has a sequel ?
This is so great! moar please!
I am loving this series. I particularly love how you p direct attention toward the reversed gender roles of Equestria, so few fics actively pursue that Avenue of writing. I can’t wait for more
Man keep it up
And now we wait for the confrontation between Twilight n Fluttershy against Rainbow Dash covered in nut cream, I wonder how well those two are going to take it that their slothful friend beat them to the punch of getting some action with their mysterious stallion friend.
I can't wait to see more of this story.
,,, never before have I been in a position where I'm actually just scrolling through the porn with a smile on my face- not for the porn, but for the enevitable reaction that will come of it.
Talk about being cocky
Now.... Consequences!!
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pun intended?
Fluttershy is going to kill her, I think.