A surely weak and helpless stallion is living on the edge of the Everfree. Twilight and co. attempt to rescue him and herd him under the safety of mares. Said stallion happens to like the sound of herding, but he'll not say it outright. (RGRE)
Wow, this story is very quickly turning into something far more than what I would normally expect from your stories. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hopefully, Jason manages to make up with Twilight and gets some common ground with the other mares soon.
9297310 Jason has actually yet to fuck anyone. He's received a blowjob from Pinkie and Rainbow, the former being rather forced, and almost kissed Twilight. Oh, and Fluttershy tasted his load one time because she's a little creepy.
9297316 That makes the opportunity to mess things up further , even more dangerous . But hopefully coco isn't overly vindictive or tales advatange of Jasons state and helps him get his shit together instead , be it for raritys sake or otherwise
Well, okay, maybe she'd just shout at him a bunch, but Coco could be scary when she was angry. She thought so, anyways.
ha ha she soon going to find out what scary really like and she find it super hot and then news will spread and Jason have every mare from the princess down coming by to see the stallion, and his woes with rarity will be the least of his problems
But I admire how he's managed to take the opportunity to wrest back some control over the situation, convincing Twilight to do what he wants, even if only temporarily.
Can he get a restraining order for himself and maybe talk to a pony of power (Mayor Mare, Luna, Celestia, or even Cadence/Shining Armor) to help him or get him a protector/guard?
Its the simple thing like this that sometimes gets overlooked because humans sometimes get dum or forget that sometimes the answer to most problems are just staring you in the face. (This is a reaccoring problem for me so i know what im talking about. That and i sadly know more insane or mentally challenged people who are not only smarter than me, but also are smarter than some drivers these days. )
Gods dammit Twilight. Worst timing ever. Hopefully she can explain/confess everything to Rarity. I'm also hoping Coco might be able to help once Jason explains things to her. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
9298104 He can't, because Twilight is royalty. Basically, the highest power in the land. Also, given her feats, what type of judge would think he was telling the truth?
9298179 But acording to this story. Males are protected and prioritized about females and most other females would protect the male from another female if the mqle has proof. So all he will need is proof or ask applejack to question twilight while she's on trial. The princesses have a tendency to protect the species in this story and Celestia is her mentor and teacher, so any rules Twilight breaks can be questioned by a greater power and the people of ponyville can be witnesses as well as twilights friends. That and the others are also acting off as more than once has he been sexually harassed but one technically threatening to rape him.
I've been reading How many friends have you made today? and its sequels and even then its handled by a pony who sees right from wrong. There are also other stories where many ponies fuck up and its handled. Even ones where the princesses break the law and they have to pay the price for there actions.
I'm officially addicted to this story can't stop reading it,I hope that he does make a herd wuth the main six and Twilight canfix this and get it to go in that direction.
Twilight could've chosen this moment to shut up. She could have taken on board that I was pissed at her, that I was trying to exercise damage control, and that all of this was her fucking fault. She could've held her tongue. Instead, she turned to Rarity as if she was discussing a conspiracy to commit murder. "Pinkie said it happened last night, on Jason's way to Ponyville!"
First person narrative.
You used Third person narrative everywhere else. Also, yay update.
9298201 while that true she princess celestia student plus a princess in her own right , he probably find the average pony look the other way for royalty, and i think getting other princess involved would make things way worse for him then better
This story has a hell of a lot more plot (pun not intended) and I am really enjoying it hope to see this get updated more since your hiatus on some of your stories
You know for as out of her depth, and completely socially inept as she is in this situation, I can't help but think the reason you've not introduced Applejack yet, is that she'd be somehow worse at dealing with Jason and the unfurling clusterfuck that is his presence in RGRE than Twilight is being.
Probably take raw offence to the idea that a stallion could provide for himself and try to physically drag him off so that "better hooves" could take care of his garden, at which point the words would turn poisonous, or there'd be a slap, at which point everything breaks down.
After her shift, she'd be heading down to see this Jason hunk, and finding out just what was wrong with her boss. And if he'd been the one to upset her, he was gonna be in for a world of abuse.
Well, okay, maybe she'd just shout at him a bunch, but Coco could be scary when she was angry. She thought so, anyways.
I'm sort of imagining her cracking a shit at him, him sort of just agreeing with every word she says, and her getting creeped out by it.
9298571 on a slightly different note. what do you think twight will do next? I mean she has now screwed up all nine layers o hell with this guy and won't help him deal with the problem with her and her friends. mainly everyone wanting him for themselves. there are many levels of stupid and shes getting to the level of stupid that makes people famous on our world. (Twilight's current level of stupid: Accusing a rape victim of cheating on you when your not even in a relationship with her)
Coco's totally going to try yelling at him. She's going to try standing tall and getting in close in an attempt to be intimidating. Jason's going to laugh in disbelief, Coco's going to blush, and right then Twilight's going to pop back in.
In my opinion Jason fucked up just as much as Twilight and deserves no sympathy, honestly after this I can't really enjoy the antics of the petulant man child that is Jason anymore.
Jason brushed his lips against Twilight's. He ignored the amazing softness of them, the fact that his body reacted to the feeling, the notion in his mind to push forwards. He waited for Twilight to return the affection, and pulled away instantly. "Now, you're never going to have sex with me."
I have to admit, this is suprisingly good. In fact, you could probably drop all descriptions of sexual acts altogether and still have me hooked. I know you don't really watch porn for the plot, but... ;)
I don't know Jason I think you took an L here if I was you I would adjust fucked twilight and then tell her to make it up She would have been happy and willing
Twilight shook her head rapidly, tears forming just as quickly, but Jason didn't care. He'd already seen his share today, and his sympathy had long dried up. "No, you can't do this, it isn't fair! I wasn't thinking, I just liked you a lot, that's all... I didn't mean to cause such a problem for you, or to make you sad!" Twilight wiped at her eyes, a tremble to her lip. "I'm sorry, Jason. I'll fix this, I promise. I'll never expect anything of you again, or treat you like property, just don't cut me out of your life. Give me one more chance."
I would like to bring up. He ruined his own relationship. Twilight did not force him the fuck. No one on top of that. Eventually rarity would have found out by pinkie pie or someone else. So it's kind of a weird situation that he said. Well. Try to like the thought for telling her friend. What's a good friend would tell you this anyway
Wow, this story is very quickly turning into something far more than what I would normally expect from your stories. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Hopefully, Jason manages to make up with Twilight and gets some common ground with the other mares soon.
Damnit Jason, be smart about this! Just take Twilight outback, Snap her neck, and go give her body to the Timberwolves to eat. Problem solved!
And that’s when Twilight knew; she done bucked up.
I forgot bookmark this story
Twilight you stupid bitch.
Let me Guess , she fucks coco too
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Jason has actually yet to fuck anyone. He's received a blowjob from Pinkie and Rainbow, the former being rather forced, and almost kissed Twilight. Oh, and Fluttershy tasted his load one time because she's a little creepy.
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That makes the opportunity to mess things up further , even more dangerous .
But hopefully coco isn't overly vindictive or tales advatange of Jasons state and helps him get his shit together instead , be it for raritys sake or otherwise
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Exactly. Considering how extremely unstable Twilight is, being in a relationship with her would never be worth the trouble.
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Jason already has his shit together, he was just never allowed to explain what actually happened.
ha ha she soon going to find out what scary really like and she find it super hot and then news will spread and Jason have every mare from the princess down coming by to see the stallion, and his woes with rarity will be the least of his problems
I like this one.
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From what he did , i got that he doesn't or soon may not, sending twilight after Rarity can backfire horribly
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Tempting, certainly.
But I admire how he's managed to take the opportunity to wrest back some control over the situation, convincing Twilight to do what he wants, even if only temporarily.
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Not even a relationship. She is talking, harrassing, slandering, and even attacking those around him to get to him.
In most causes, a Restraining order would be too less, she would be thrown in jail, if not a mental hospital over this kinda obsession.
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More like he should do that with Pinkie. This is all HER fault, after all.
Goddammit Twiggles, again?
Can he get a restraining order for himself and maybe talk to a pony of power (Mayor Mare,
Luna, Celestia, or even Cadence/Shining Armor) to help him or get him a protector/guard?
Its the simple thing like this that sometimes gets overlooked because humans sometimes get dum or forget that sometimes the answer to most problems are just staring you in the face. (This is a reaccoring problem for me so i know what im talking about. That and i sadly know more insane or mentally challenged people who are not only smarter than me, but also are smarter than some drivers these days. )
Gods dammit Twilight. Worst timing ever. Hopefully she can explain/confess everything to Rarity. I'm also hoping Coco might be able to help once Jason explains things to her. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading the next one.
This is a really odd combination of RGRE. Mares act possessive, but they're also overly emotional, just like normal.
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He can't, because Twilight is royalty. Basically, the highest power in the land. Also, given her feats, what type of judge would think he was telling the truth?
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But acording to this story. Males are protected and prioritized about females and most other females would protect the male from another female if the mqle has proof. So all he will need is proof or ask applejack to question twilight while she's on trial. The princesses have a tendency to protect the species in this story and Celestia is her mentor and teacher, so any rules Twilight breaks can be questioned by a greater power and the people of ponyville can be witnesses as well as twilights friends. That and the others are also acting off as more than once has he been sexually harassed but one technically threatening to rape him.
I've been reading How many friends have you made today? and its sequels and even then its handled by a pony who sees right from wrong. There are also other stories where many ponies fuck up and its handled. Even ones where the princesses break the law and they have to pay the price for there actions.
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Also sorry about these rants. I normally dont do big comment like this. I guess im just in a mood, so i hope you enjoy the story sugestion.
Last chapter, I understood that everything he built with Rarity was fucked. But the sudden bout of sanity and cognizance in his rage? Fuck
Coco, you're gonna be another casualty if you approach, you're like every other mare there, thirsty as fuck underneath.
I'm officially addicted to this story can't stop reading it,I hope that he does make a herd wuth the main six and Twilight canfix this and get it to go in that direction.
There's a bit of switching narrative here.
First person narrative.
You used Third person narrative everywhere else.
Also, yay update.
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while that true she princess celestia student plus a princess in her own right , he probably find the average pony look the other way for royalty, and i think getting other princess involved would make things way worse for him then better
This story has a hell of a lot more plot (pun not intended) and I am really enjoying it hope to see this get updated more since your hiatus on some of your stories
You know for as out of her depth, and completely socially inept as she is in this situation, I can't help but think the reason you've not introduced Applejack yet, is that she'd be somehow worse at dealing with Jason and the unfurling clusterfuck that is his presence in RGRE than Twilight is being.
Probably take raw offence to the idea that a stallion could provide for himself and try to physically drag him off so that "better hooves" could take care of his garden, at which point the words would turn poisonous, or there'd be a slap, at which point everything breaks down.
I'm sort of imagining her cracking a shit at him, him sort of just agreeing with every word she says, and her getting creeped out by it.
Hit this chapter and saw there was no more out yet. First words out of my mouth were "Motherfucker, I caught up."
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on a slightly different note. what do you think twight will do next? I mean she has now screwed up all nine layers o hell with this guy and won't help him deal with the problem with her and her friends. mainly everyone wanting him for themselves. there are many levels of stupid and shes getting to the level of stupid that makes people famous on our world. (Twilight's current level of stupid: Accusing a rape victim of cheating on you when your not even in a relationship with her)
God damnit! I CAUGHT UP NO!!!
Coco's totally going to try yelling at him. She's going to try standing tall and getting in close in an attempt to be intimidating. Jason's going to laugh in disbelief, Coco's going to blush, and right then Twilight's going to pop back in.
"You'd rut Coco too?!" Twilight poofs back out.
Day-um.
I really loving this story so far! I hope you plan to update it soon, I can't wait!!
well fuck
In my opinion Jason fucked up just as much as Twilight and deserves no sympathy, honestly after this I can't really enjoy the antics of the petulant man child that is Jason anymore.
Fuck me... Where's the next chapter?
: *dies internally*
Hahaha, Twi screwed up so hard the style changed for a moment!
I have to admit, this is suprisingly good. In fact, you could probably drop all descriptions of sexual acts altogether and still have me hooked. I know you don't really watch porn for the plot, but... ;)
I don't know Jason I think you took an L here if I was you I would adjust fucked twilight and then tell her to make it up
She would have been happy and willing
Is it wrong to say that I hope twilight gets what she wants to???
I would like to bring up. He ruined his own relationship. Twilight did not force him the fuck. No one on top of that. Eventually rarity would have found out by pinkie pie or someone else. So it's kind of a weird situation that he said. Well. Try to like the thought for telling her friend. What's a good friend would tell you this anyway