A surely weak and helpless stallion is living on the edge of the Everfree. Twilight and co. attempt to rescue him and herd him under the safety of mares. Said stallion happens to like the sound of herding, but he'll not say it outright. (RGRE)
"Let"? Don't you mean "When Pinkie ambushed and molested him on the way to his date with her friend"?
But why bother with semantics? You obviously are FAR too busy trying to force your way into bed with a stranger to be a good friend. No, getting a quick screw is obviously much more important than friendship.
9231670 A) Pinkie didn't know who Jason was going to see when she jumped him, he never told her in an effort to not complicate things. B) All Twilight knows at this point is whatever Pinkie's told her, assuming she didn't read her friend's mind.
But you're right in spite of that—Twilight's being a total dick.
If that's enough to ruin his chances for a meaningful relationship, then I don't know what he could do to make up for it, and with how Rarity seems to be in comparison to others, it doesn't look like sex can solve it.
Pinkie wanted to blow him, and told him so very aggressively, and he decided it would be easier to just let her, you know, do what she wanted instead of running the risk of agitating her.
I’m sure he’ll let Twilight blow him, if she promises to calm down and not, you know, insist.
ADDENDUM: Can’t believe I forgot the part where Pinkie threatened to camp out at his house and jump him even if he gave her what she wanted. Really, the smart thing for him to do right now is just leave Equestria. Yeah, he might miss whatever shot he has with Rarity, but it’ll beat the hell out of being raped and murdered and turned into cupcakes.
9232043 First, I was expressing an opinion. I'll be more clear in the future with other comments on other stories. Second, I have never seen any comments of yours in any of the T.U.P. stories, (thus leading me to believe you have not actually read them) so I would ask you not to reference it or me as if you know me. Now I will admit that I was being judgemental and I was probably being bitchy when I left that comment, so apologies to the author. I should have simply said, 'sorry but this is not my thing, and left it alone. I'll keep it in mind in the future.
Lastly, I am not the sole arbiter of anything except my own work and while I admit to being judgemental, the condescending tone you used does nothing to help and only acts as a catalyst for anger and escalating arguments. Just some thoughts for the future.
9232655 Reverse Gender Roles Equestria Think of it as if the mares have the weirdest mix of chivalry and sexism of men or be very crass and direct if they're sex starved, in a world where males are in short supply. While the males are like stereotypes of women, often weak, whiny and prissy and show traits of the old fashioned stay at home wife, gardens, gossip and fashion.
That's the theme, as authors toss in a human male, transformed or normal
9231859 Normally this would be the case, due to the alternative (spending time talking) costing someone oppertunity cost (that being that it costs them time they could spend doing something else) and effort, however, do you really think that Pinky wouldn't spend that time talking even if he wasn't there? He was clearly bribing her into doing something other then talking while she was expressing a desire of hers that she would perfer to be bribed with, albeit badly and agressively.
I mean, if she was intentionally making a decision of being irritating based on bribes being given to people that are then it would be different, but that doesn't sound like a thing that would happen.
I really like this take on Rarity and too bad Twi showed up to interrupt things. Jason should've come clean while he still had the chance. Well, the story's description mentions herds so I'm hoping it'll work out. Assuming Rarity gives Jason the chance to explain what happened. Thanks for the update! I'm glad the story is not dead.
I'm hoping Jason is honest about what happened. There's enough potential drama that the truth would generate for the sake of the story. Rarity could be hurt by the fact that Jason didn't put his hoof down and stop Pinkie, or she might get upset at Jason for calling her friend a sloot in whatever careless words he may use. But ultimately she would end up forgiving him.
Honestly I was hoping Pinkie would be immune to dick/ socially conscious of ponies as ponies and not just vagina and dick. Seems to me Pinkie is hyper aware of others and knows what ponies want, but she wanted the "D". Love how you wrote Rarity.
9233142 Pretty sure that if you look at my user page It hasn't gone over a week offline. When I go offline for over a month or two, then you can start to worry.
WOw!!! Tis was good. Cant wait for other stories to be updated, like the Don't let into house story, and the SPike Photo shoot one. Good job as always
Dammit, Pinkie! You don’t just blow and blab!
Bad Pinkie bad you don't blow and tell. That wasn't something a friend would do.
That was really nice. Then the last part ruined it like a brick through a window.
But what a crash it made!
Well done!
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Twas the good kind of crash as well. Glass everywhere, the works.
"Let"? Don't you mean "When Pinkie ambushed and molested him on the way to his date with her friend"?
But why bother with semantics? You obviously are FAR too busy trying to force your way into bed with a stranger to be a good friend. No, getting a quick screw is obviously much more important than friendship.
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A) Pinkie didn't know who Jason was going to see when she jumped him, he never told her in an effort to not complicate things. B) All Twilight knows at this point is whatever Pinkie's told her, assuming she didn't read her friend's mind.
But you're right in spite of that—Twilight's being a total dick.
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Hi Neo
Wonder how hes going to get through this one.
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Hah! puns. Love it
Oh Sparkle really needs some dicking, she gets downright nasty when she hasn't gotten some in some time
I just hope his budding romance with Rarity doesn't get ruined by that. And that Rarity genuinely wants to be with him, not just get rutted.
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Most definitely
No
Nooo~
If that's enough to ruin his chances for a meaningful relationship, then I don't know what he could do to make up for it, and with how Rarity seems to be in comparison to others, it doesn't look like sex can solve it.
Purple is the colour of sexual frustration. Twilight is very very purple.
No, he didn’t let Pinkie blow him.
Pinkie wanted to blow him, and told him so very aggressively, and he decided it would be easier to just let her, you know, do what she wanted instead of running the risk of agitating her.
I’m sure he’ll let Twilight blow him, if she promises to calm down and not, you know, insist.
ADDENDUM:
Can’t believe I forgot the part where Pinkie threatened to camp out at his house and jump him even if he gave her what she wanted. Really, the smart thing for him to do right now is just leave Equestria. Yeah, he might miss whatever shot he has with Rarity, but it’ll beat the hell out of being raped and murdered and turned into cupcakes.
Dammit Twilight!
Dammit Pinkie!
-Ru
*Inhale* ~*Exhale* Dammit purplehorse....
Damn it Twilight you fucking cockblock not cool!!
DAMMIT PINKIE!!!
9232043 First, I was expressing an opinion. I'll be more clear in the future with other comments on other stories. Second, I have never seen any comments of yours in any of the T.U.P. stories, (thus leading me to believe you have not actually read them) so I would ask you not to reference it or me as if you know me. Now I will admit that I was being judgemental and I was probably being bitchy when I left that comment, so apologies to the author. I should have simply said, 'sorry but this is not my thing, and left it alone. I'll keep it in mind in the future.
Lastly, I am not the sole arbiter of anything except my own work and while I admit to being judgemental, the condescending tone you used does nothing to help and only acts as a catalyst for anger and escalating arguments. Just some thoughts for the future.
Ah-hahaha, that went from fuckin Disney levels of cute to a train wreck in a flash of purple light.
Seems that Pinkie sucks, in more ways than one.
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Reverse Gender Roles Equestria
Think of it as if the mares have the weirdest mix of chivalry and sexism of men or be very crass and direct if they're sex starved, in a world where males are in short supply. While the males are like stereotypes of women, often weak, whiny and prissy and show traits of the old fashioned stay at home wife, gardens, gossip and fashion.
That's the theme, as authors toss in a human male, transformed or normal
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You're alive!
[REEEES IN OROKIN]
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Normally this would be the case, due to the alternative (spending time talking) costing someone oppertunity cost (that being that it costs them time they could spend doing something else) and effort, however, do you really think that Pinky wouldn't spend that time talking even if he wasn't there? He was clearly bribing her into doing something other then talking while she was expressing a desire of hers that she would perfer to be bribed with, albeit badly and agressively.
I mean, if she was intentionally making a decision of being irritating based on bribes being given to people that are then it would be different, but that doesn't sound like a thing that would happen.
You could say he........Blew it.
I really like this take on Rarity and too bad Twi showed up to interrupt things. Jason should've come clean while he still had the chance. Well, the story's description mentions herds so I'm hoping it'll work out. Assuming Rarity gives Jason the chance to explain what happened. Thanks for the update! I'm glad the story is not dead.
I'm hoping Jason is honest about what happened. There's enough potential drama that the truth would generate for the sake of the story. Rarity could be hurt by the fact that Jason didn't put his hoof down and stop Pinkie, or she might get upset at Jason for calling her friend a sloot in whatever careless words he may use. But ultimately she would end up forgiving him.
Honestly I was hoping Pinkie would be immune to dick/ socially conscious of ponies as ponies and not just vagina and dick. Seems to me Pinkie is hyper aware of others and knows what ponies want, but she wanted the "D". Love how you wrote Rarity.
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Pretty sure that if you look at my user page It hasn't gone over a week offline. When I go offline for over a month or two, then you can start to worry.
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Mobile version, I think it only shows online or offline.
Youch. Ball's in your court, Jason.
CURSE YOU ALL, YOU DAMN HORNY MATHRIARCAL PONY SOCIETY... minus you rarity, you are okay
Oof
NOOOOOO, WHY?!!?
I was somehow actually invested in Rarity & Jason and now it's blowing up before my eyes!
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-insert joke about balls being in pinkies mouth-
Twilight is a bad horse and she needs to be punished for interrupting Jason. Have him fuck her brains out as payback.
9250508 oooh now I get it thanks
Foreverrrrr!