A surely weak and helpless stallion is living on the edge of the Everfree. Twilight and co. attempt to rescue him and herd him under the safety of mares. Said stallion happens to like the sound of herding, but he'll not say it outright. (RGRE)
9054939 A little behind the scenes author time: The most time I spent on anything in this chapter was deciding whether to use the word 'normality' or 'normalcy' in the chapter title. I couldn't decide which I preferred for the life of me and it took up way too much time.
I was hoping for rarity to have been acting genuinely , but not this much . i think it breaks the suspension of disbelief of having both random ponies and some of her friends acting the way they do . To conteract that , i think more enphasis should be put in portraying rainbow and twilight as even if products of their society , specially akward when dealing with the opposite gender .
This is the first story I have read...in a long time...the author managed to make me not hate Rarity on some level and make me find her character somewhat charming. I like this Rarity. Do continue.
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how Rarity and Jason's relationship progresses. I'm curious if she'll be shown to be just as eccentric as her friends.
9055709 ..... please tell me that is sarcasm? please... It is obvious that she is manipulating him.. she is being really.. fake with Jason, she just wants to claim him before anyone else. :/
That's a quick judgment on your part. If not for the behavior of everyone else as well as my own similar suspicions I think i wouldn't bother responding. I do think there's a level of genuineness to their exchange. Mostly in how Rarity desires to take things slow and let things develop naturely.
Yes she is being nicer than Twilight and Rainbow but at the same time, she probably observed or gossiped at some point with Twilight, Rainbow, or (most likely) Fluttershy. Utilizing their experience to realize her strategy to get him first... which is a bit underhanded. I mean c'mon, she is going to wear lingerie on her first date. She obviously intends to seduce the fuck out of him, just for sex (which is different from flirting or courting for romantic purposes.). In what world is that moving slow? That and she is obviously lying about some stuff about herself to make her seem more appealing to Jacob.. which is way i called her fake... And don't get me wrong, I really like this story, has a lot of potential! This story can quite literally go anywhere and I love that!
... I also ship it... along with the rest of them... a harem i mean...or herd.. whatever you want to call it :|
edit: re-read the entire thing, and i think i'm being moreeee,.... brutal than necessary.. still suspicious though
9058847 I'm suspicious too. More because I don't see why she would behave so differently to her friends. As for the thong, I think it's a pretty common thing for women (and I guess some men) to wear nicer underclothes when dealing with romantic interests. Even if they themselves dont think anything will happen. The whole exchange felt more like friendly jabbs between friends than anything too serious. It could go either way, i suppose.
9061278 That is true, but then taking the fact that ponies are normally naked into consideration and that socks are considered lingerie... Idk well find out if its genuine or not when this story updates in another month or so.
Interesting. It would be rarity to have a bit of tact. The rest are basically nightmare level sexual harassers. That being said, I feel like she's setting herself up for failure somehow. Class tends to go out the window once you're drunk and that's really the main reason she's got him interested.
She raised an eyebrow, almost as if she was weighing his response. "Well, I sincerely hope you find whatever it is you need. It shows dedication and self-appreciation, that you've gone out and searched for it. Too many people waste away their lives just dreaming of what they could have." She giggled, slipping her hoof up from her chin to cover her mouth. "Well, I'd know."
She makes a logical argument. I do just that, too. Waste away...
Beautiful. Just as it says on the tin: a little slice of normalcy.
Pft. Let's see how long THAT lasts.
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A little behind the scenes author time: The most time I spent on anything in this chapter was deciding whether to use the word 'normality' or 'normalcy' in the chapter title. I couldn't decide which I preferred for the life of me and it took up way too much time.
Glad you enjoyed!
I think Coco will soon want into the action I bet. Give that mare some loving, I hope.
This, is perfect.
He wants a "normal" girl
She wants a "natural" romance
The sex better be hot
I was hoping for rarity to have been acting genuinely , but not this much . i think it breaks the suspension of disbelief of having both random ponies and some of her friends acting the way they do . To conteract that , i think more enphasis should be put in portraying rainbow and twilight as even if products of their society , specially akward when dealing with the opposite gender .
Give rarity a good kinky fetish like anal or skull fucking Something messy for that make up she likes to wear
OH, the poor soul never stood a chance...
But what's going to happen to little Coco Pommel?.
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I would have just flipped a coin or something like that
Go rares win his heart and get into his metaphorical pants.
Awww that was adorable. Kinda hoping Rarity turns out normal, just to see how the rest of the girls react when she gets him for herself.
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We have a winner, ladies and gentleman!
Now if only she could impart some of her wisdom on the rest of her friends.
That was a sweet and cute chapter.
Glad to see at least one mare acting relatively normal.
Now to just sit back, relax, and wait for when Jason plows that perfect marshmallow plot.
This is the first story I have read...in a long time...the author managed to make me not hate Rarity on some level and make me find her character somewhat charming. I like this Rarity. Do continue.
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how Rarity and Jason's relationship progresses. I'm curious if she'll be shown to be just as eccentric as her friends.
Jason is so fabulously, wonderfully doomed
Well fuck my grundle, this story is actually pretty good.
Whoa. Landmark moment here. Rarity in a RGRE story that is nice and seems to be worth something. I quite like this.
Oh my. Rarity is good when it comes to flirting.
Though, I suppose I shouldn’t be surprised.
Ok. I'm now rooting for, Rarity. Glad to know her feel and interaction are real and not so slutty.
Good job!
This story is bad on quite a few levels.
I think it'd be interesting if he'd just tell his squad of pony stalkers that the gender roles are mostly reversed where he's from.
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Yeah but that doesn't stop it from being entertaining.
Jason you idiot! You're a fly in a spider's web you dumbass!
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Fuck your own grundle.
The hell does RGRE mean?
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..... please tell me that is sarcasm? please... It is obvious that she is manipulating him.. she is being really.. fake with Jason, she just wants to claim him before anyone else. :/
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All courtship is manipulation of some sort. She's treating him way better than the other mares did, and that counts for a lot.
RGRE stands for Reverse Gender Roles Equestria.
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I ship it
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Reverse gender roles equestria
That's a quick judgment on your part. If not for the behavior of everyone else as well as my own similar suspicions I think i wouldn't bother responding. I do think there's a level of genuineness to their exchange. Mostly in how Rarity desires to take things slow and let things develop naturely.
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That's awful criticicizm; why do you think that? Be constructive when you make such a statement.
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Yes she is being nicer than Twilight and Rainbow but at the same time, she probably observed or gossiped at some point with Twilight, Rainbow, or (most likely) Fluttershy. Utilizing their experience to realize her strategy to get him first... which is a bit underhanded.
I mean c'mon, she is going to wear lingerie on her first date. She obviously intends to seduce the fuck out of him, just for sex (which is different from flirting or courting for romantic purposes.). In what world is that moving slow?
That and she is obviously lying about some stuff about herself to make her seem more appealing to Jacob.. which is way i called her fake... And don't get me wrong, I really like this story, has a lot of potential! This story can quite literally go anywhere and I love that!
... I also ship it... along with the rest of them... a harem i mean...or herd.. whatever you want to call it :|
edit: re-read the entire thing, and i think i'm being moreeee,.... brutal than necessary.. still suspicious though
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I'm suspicious too. More because I don't see why she would behave so differently to her friends. As for the thong, I think it's a pretty common thing for women (and I guess some men) to wear nicer underclothes when dealing with romantic interests. Even if they themselves dont think anything will happen. The whole exchange felt more like friendly jabbs between friends than anything too serious. It could go either way, i suppose.
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That is true, but then taking the fact that ponies are normally naked into consideration and that socks are considered lingerie... Idk well find out if its genuine or not when this story updates in another month or so.
Too many people ? waste away their lives just dreaming of what they could have
people in pony's speech ?
I'm odd in the fact I'm kind of hoping Rarity will secretly be a femcolt in this one.
Wut does RGRE mean?
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Reverse gender roles (in) equestria
Okay I really enjoyed how you wrote the dialogue in this one.
It's interesting that this isn't just pure smut.
So. You're telling me. That this incomplete story. Already has. A completed sequel.
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Every day, pony strays further from Faust.
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Nevermind, I actually read the synopsis of the sequel and now I understand.
This was in Human Harems, but I don't see the human Tag.
Who made the mistake?
Interesting. It would be rarity to have a bit of tact. The rest are basically nightmare level sexual harassers. That being said, I feel like she's setting herself up for failure somehow. Class tends to go out the window once you're drunk and that's really the main reason she's got him interested.
Don't rush it rarity...
Updates?
She makes a logical argument. I do just that, too. Waste away...
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I mean we are doing it right now.........
Interesting, so she's genuine. How... Contrasting.