In all her Glory

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Nuhri1995

Nuhri1995 #1 · Apr 19th, 2018 · · ·

The idea is awesome, but the grammar is awful! Most of it just spelling mistakes, but the shock value of Fluttershy going at it almost as soon as she sees "it" is mostly lost because the grammar is so bad. I'll still leave like because I like this kind of stuff but, I'm tempted to press dislike due to the lack of proper grammar. Grammar. I wrote it so often I almost forgot what the word means. XD

Vobvivous

Vobvivous #2 · Apr 19th, 2018 · · ·

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Thanks for the comment, ill have to re-read through the story to check for grammar

Bronyb3n

Bronyb3n #3 · May 7th, 2018 · · ·

great story, love glory hole stuff

bone123

bone123 #4 · Aug 15th, 2018 · · ·

Alright then, that was pretty damn good. I hope you do decide to do more chapters you've certainly caught my attention.

Oops door

Oops door #5 · Aug 15th, 2018 · · ·

Fluttershy looked back up at the flustered face of her princess and nodded. She slowly removed the still hard cock by walkinf forward, swaying her hips as she did so. The princess expected for the pony to finish her off with her hooves and mouth but she certainly wasn't complainign when she felt the worth of the pegasus' rear. It was arduous work but with each shock like burst of pain delivered to the Pegasus' rump, and equally powerful blast of pleasure was given to the sun monarch. That was until the flared head finally found its home, nested into Fluttershy's ass. A howl of pain and a jet of pre cum offset each other.

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Satch

Satch #6 · Aug 16th, 2018 · · 1 ·

Ah, the classic genderswap+human gloryhole story :P
Not sure if he's hyper as well, but that's usually implied heh.

Hm, as pointed out though: You should do a bit more grammar checking. What are you using to write these btw? Some programs got an auto-spell check. But, yeah, doing a proofread before publish wouldn't hurt.

PuzzleMaster98