Brutalassmaster
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Before I read this...
HAHAHAHA you're awesome. I'm honoured to be a character in your fic.
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Just read it, it was hilarious.
I'd just like to say I had no part in making this, however I thoroughly enjoyed it and found it hilarious.
Nice job dude. Also where's Idon'twannaknow's place in this? or zelatynowy? They should be introduced in chapter two.
970513 they'll be around, Zealoty seems like too much of a pussy for any REAL work so he'll be the desk greeter or some shit. Don'twannaknow will come in after we capture Scootaloo.
970513 Zealtoy will also be a women.
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NA we could link our stories up, Remember that Don'twannaknow actually killed rainbow dash and scoots in a fit of alcoholic psychosis (in his fanfic), We should get him to be the lovable alcoholic fiend, maybe the Equestria we're stealing ponies from is actually an alternative universe to the one RD AND SCOOTS came from in his fic. Or we could just write whatever (But get IDon'twannaknow to write his own character, because he's awesome).
970548 Zealoty will be a woman. *wink* *wink* we will each probably fuck her/him (Im still not sure) at least once.
With your name being "Brutalassmaster" I'm probably going to love this fic.....
Wow... Brutal.... But for some reason I'm not laughing nor crying .... Maybe because I've seen and written ... Plus imagined worst
HAHAHA, awesome.
It's an interesting concept, and could have even been a decent story if it wasn't so mind-numbingly cruel.
Ooooohh...Intersteing!
*Reads it*
That was actually kinda cool. Great job at weirding me the fuck out!
another good one.
Grimdark's are good. All hail the master.
I like it.
hmmmm, first of all, you need ome better description, the ponies usually don't need much description since everyone already has a visual aid for that, but the humans you need to describe, we don't have pictures of them to help there. second of all, the berry punch i play in RP isn't exactly happy about this fic
983485 Your Berry Punch can suck my balls, oh, wait, she already did.
Don't you dare mess with Pip or Sweetie Belle!Their too adorable!I like RD and all but if I was her I would settle the fudge down and pretend it doesn't bother me to really mess with their minds!Although they already seem pretty fudged up.
991765 in that case we would force her to forcce feed scootaloo shit in order to break her spirits
Well fudge me I wouldn't last long!
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Holy crap...this is the most twisted thing I have read.
...and I read tentacle clopfics.
(I can handle tentacle-rape clopfics, but human-to-pony foalrape is just too much.)
1000531 Wait, there are tentacle clopfics?
Anyway, how come this masterpiece did not appear in my notification box.
970554 Why so cruel, man, I want to reap ponies too.
Anyways, who is who in this?
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Said tentacle clopfic has gratuitous amounts of gore too.
This is the clopfic. Read at your own risk
1004548 This was pretty funny. Thanks.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
1002709 At first The human characters were named after my friends on this site (Username) But then Poultron toldme to change it so I did. Jhon is Wrathofgod William is me (My real name BTW) And newfag is nobody in general because he is going to die eventually.
I don't think celestia is going to like this might want to ask that guy if he has a combat helicopter.
1007626 Hmmm, Celestia < .50 cal Machinegun
This is awful, sadistic, gross, and wrong. Brutalassmaster, why are you so content on writing stories about ponies suffering physically and emotionally. It's just uncomfortable.
This is horrible! There are are many reasons why it is, but for the sake of time, I'm going to limit myself to just three. 1: Rape. Rape is always awful, but when you also rape a child right in front of her mother, that's just one of the worst things ever! 2: The torture. Blood and gore isn't necessarily bad, but it needs to have a point. There isn't much point to this torture. Even if they're trying to teach Berry Punch a lesson, it doesn't make much sense. Which brings me to number three. 3: Berry Pinch's death. I understand that they're trying to them a lesson, but why did they kill her? She obviously got more business than her mother, so it would have been smarter just to rape her and have to mother watch helplessly. This story is terrible because of its subject matter, characters, and overall tone. I would say sorry for being a troll, but being a troll is much better than liking this story.
1029672 mabey to yo! I fapped to this.
once again, you are not welcom here Pegusi filth!
Heil dem Herrenrasse!
1029672 Hey, I liked this
This is sick! First of all, explain to me why you like it. Second, if you saw a pony that wasn't a unicorn, you would want to kidnap and rape her?! Seriously?! Also, Brutalassmaster, knock off all the unicorn supremacy crap, it's getting old.
I'm seeing a lot of conflicting opinions here. On the one hand, people are saying they enjoyed and even laughed at the story. I even see "A Fun Day!" author DontWannaKnow here. On the other, people are calling it vile and disgusting. Not even RingmasterJ5, who had previously riffed a story about Tony Stark wearing adult diapers and needing the Hulk to change him, was comfortable touching it.
What do I think? Well, I agree with Ring; this may be even more vile than fucking "Pinkie Pie the filly molester." A story I only read for the purposes of riffing it, and deeply regretted immediately after. Not even "A Fun Day!" went to such disgusting lengths, and I'm certain I won't need to recount to you what happened in that story. Which, again, I read to riff, and I'm proud of the job I did of it.
This is not a possibility, it's a certainty. I AM riffing this story in the near future. Stories this deserving don't come by often enough.
1109552 pardon me, but what does Riffing mean? Also Pinkie pie the filly molester was a GREAT peice of literature to clop to.
1074617 If I saw a ponie who wasn't a UnicornI would most likely hide my children so they wouldn't be foalnapped/raped by the lesser dirt ponies. And what act? Earth Ponies seriously are highly inferior the the Unicorn race.
I said crap, not act. Also, you show earth ponies and pegasi getting raped, not the other way around. Third, you have kids?
1132832 Well, probably, there was that one time with that Canadian bitch, so mabey. But thats not important right now. Anyway, I know i show the lesser races getting what they desearve. I may eventually show women being slaves for the main characters.
But the pegasi and earth ponies never did anything wrong! Not the unicorns either. It's just the way they are written in a story.
1132971 They have done wrong, they are useless and waste resources. The only things they are good for is work and slavery. Like women.
1132172 Trust me. It'll be best if I finish the riff before you see it. No self-respecting troll should live without that knowledge, but I'm gonna make you learn the hard way.
Oh, by the by, Ruby Pinch is a unicorn. Does being a filly negate that?
Whoa, dude! I didn't know you were that fucked up! That's incredibly sexist! I mean, my best friend is a girl!
1137653 How am I fucked up? you're the one who is friends with an object. If you think that was offensive you should probsbly leave before I go into my idea of a perfect world.
1133943 1) Ihave no idea what you just said.
2) I didn't use Ruby pinch I used BERRY pinch. google it.
An object?! Are you living in 1780 or something?!
1138813 No... Last time I cheacked it was 2012. Women are ment for sexand labor. Men are ment for fighting and enslaving those deemed "Lesser"
I'm trying really hard not to think about it but if they are just parading around Ponyville shooting and kidnapping I'd think the Equestrian military would attack and I know those three have a lot of guns but the sheer number of ponies could easily overwhelm them not to mention Princess Celestia and Luna would be fighting them too.
1160267 They SNEAK around ponyville. The only time one of themstarted shooting like a maniac was at Fluttershy's cabin.
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Okay I misunderstood, you made it sound more like they were just running around shooting.
1163811 Oh, guess that did make it sound like that. Oh well.
1138254 Well. I've started that thing you couldn't define (though if you REALLY want to know, ask DontWannaKnow). Through it, I realized I'd never seen any of chapter three before starting. Ugh. There'll be a link here within a week.
And I DID look it up. Her name IS Ruby Pinch, and searching "Berry Pinch" brought up fewer results for the same character that REDIRECTED to "Ruby Pinch." And she's a unicorn, as I brought up before, so my question still stands.
EDIT: I also may have just directed some traffic your way. Some train traffic. [/crypticforeshadowing]