Brutalassmaster
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Lol, Good work, very funny.
Dare I say that Pinkamina has competition?
I felt the ending was rushed but other than that OK story
"It quickly penetrated into Octavia's bran"
Oh noes! How will she get her fiber?!
But srsly, kudos on your first fic!
What did I just read?
Dafuq?
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I have no words, other than my rarely used image macro.
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956524 it wasn't my first. i wrote one bashing my little dashie with little dashie getting violently sexually abused, but some mld lovefag moderatot took it down with no warning, or even a notifacation.
Ah god...
um im fucking scared and hurt that one of my favorite ponies was BLEHH!
T- this better be a troll fic or I'm killing you
957012 Trollfic? to me it was a clopfic. I got off multiple time to this.
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957020 Too short to clop, man.
Srsly, you stopped in best moment, edit out few last lines and write second chapter.
So many possibilities dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
Hm. Not funny enough for trollfic, not crazy enough for gorefic, not cloppy enough for clopfic. Pls expand.
You should have drawn it out longer... otherwise it was quite funny
957020 I LOVE YOU MAN!
957020
One brony's clopfic is another brony's trollfic.
I must say that I'll do my best to avoid your fics in the future. While I'm sure that this is arousing to some I found it disturbing. That said I did find the ending rushed and if you really intended torture the pacing was very fast, perhaps slow down and draw out the individual agonies. Also simple grammar and spelling checks would likely assist in the readability of future fics.
Sandpaper ouch......,
Do not want but also not sure if I don't want
In honesty the slamming a dildo in her eye may have been the end point the wires in throat was close point same with the sandpaper but I have to say the poi t where she slammed a dildo in her eye was the point where the dark was too much but to me it was an alright quick read for my daily dose of dark fic so good on yah for that.
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
964351 NIGGERS!
dafuq? my brain says dafuq, my cock says clop...
Fuck yeah, skull fuck.
Congrats on this brilliantly epic failure of a trollfic. Loved it. Vinyl's dialect switches from drunk to sober at random, there is no grammar checking whatsoever, and never have I laughed as hard as when I saw the phrase 'sandy anus'
You win. You win all the internets. This is so horrifying bad that I can't help but love it. This is going to completely ruin Tavi for some readers, and you should be proud of that.
Oh lord...
You're writing?
I shouldn't but I'll give this trainwreck a read....
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956725
We all loved your mld abuse fic. If it's still here could you post it in a blog, if it isn't completely gone.
ill take it im the only person who honestly likes this story , im a major clopper but also love the show and its innocence , but dont hate this story
969422 No it's gone...
970936
That's fucking terrible, from now on backup your fic's man.
Also what was the title exactly(the exact name), i may be able to recover it.
970944 dashie abuse
Oh god more i love these stories now lets hope this dosnt get taken down
Ok, This might sound wierd, But throughout the whole thing all I could think of was
"Why am I reading this in Zecora's Voice?"
I will now go curl up under my bed and cry. This.. why Octavia..? Poor mare..
I.. I have no words to describe this....
Wait, some people thought was funny or erotic? This was dark and disturbing and I feel uncomfortable reading it.
OMFG THAT WAS HORRIBLE
990785>>990793 I agree, I wanted to cry when I read this.. needs to be better labeled. I nearly threw up for god's sake.. I love Octavia.. why would anyone write this? thank you for seeing it the way it should be seen.
>>Moon Brush yeah, i dont know how its funny or anything of the sort. especially getting off on it!
990822 how can youlove Octavia? she's a filthy dirt pony and deserves this, especially at the hands of the master Unicorn race.
> > brutalassmaster you are a sick sick being, and Alicorns or pegacorns are the dominant race, which just happens to be what i am, second is pegasus, then earth ponies. im sorry but a horn is only good for poking things unless you have wings to get out of the way sir f-k tard
1008359 Dirt ponies with their meaningless traditions are holding back scientific, cultural, and technology from advanceing beyond what their silly, little, inbred minds can handel. Pegusi and inferior because we can do all that they can with magic, and they also gain their powers from the rape, murder and cunsumption of Unicorn foal. as it is proven in this Unicorn Supremecy Movement Public Service announcment.
Pegasi.
We see them almost every day pushing clouds around, managing the weather and doing stunts.
But something is odd about Pegasi...
Most strikingly is how they can manipulate clouds, which are made of water vapor.
Surely they shoul simply move through them?
Then there's their wings, piddly little things, obviously too small to allow them to fly.
So how do they fly?
The answer to both of these questions is: Magic.
But how can that be? Pegasi don't have horns! How can they use magic?
Now the answer to that...
Is quite terrible.
Let me tell you a story.
The story of Ditzy and Dinky Doo.
Ditzy Doo is the resident pegasus mailmare of the quaint town of Ponyville, well known for being a klutz and very endearing, Ditzy is much loved in the little town.
However, she has a dark and insidious secret, one all pegasi share, one that has been illuminated by righteous light of the USM.
Ditzy Doo has a daughter, a unicorn named Dinky Doo.
This alone is no secret.
The reason that Ditzy had Dinky however...
Every New Moon, when the night is at its darkest Ditzy invades her daughter's room and defiles her innocence.
She does this with glee, free of remorse or pity for her scared and confused daughter.
Then once she has done this, she takes a razor and cuts her daughter.
Then Ditzy drinks.
You see, Dinky is a thing of convenience to her mother, her mother who no doubt whored herself out to countless unicorn stallions.
Dinky is nothing but a walking, talking buffet to Ditzy.
For the secret of pegasus magic...
Is the consumptio of unicorn blood and even flesh.
All across Equestria pegasi are abducting, raping and consuming unicorns to fuel their ill-gotten magics, so they may live in privelege with stolen magic above the clouds.
Remember unicorns...
Never trust any pegasus.
Lest you become their next meal.
I used to be Naive and lost like you, untill the USM showed me that Unicorns are the master race and have a Faust givin right to rule equestria and extinguish the Earth pony and Pegusi menece.
HEIL THE MASTER RACE!
Brutalassmaster, you're sounding like the MLP: FIM Hilter. Seriously? The master race? Who even cares what kind they are, they're all still ponies. Also, what's with that Ditzy Doo story?! I understand dark stories can be good if they're done right, but dude, tone it down a notch! Jeez!
1015645 Are you a dirt pony? Because you sound like one. If so then please remove yourself from this story comments thread and then proceed to beat yourself over the head with an acme brick over and over again untill you bleed out. Then you will have made Equestria a better place and made our Unicorn foals a little safer from your Foal loving tendencies. You disgust me dirt pony.
Uh, dude, I'm just a human sitting at a computer. You're taking this stuff waaaaay too seriously. Ponies are ponies, who really cares? But if I had to choose, I would want to be a Pegasus because they can fly.
WHAT THE BUCK IS THIS MAN. THAT THAT THAT JUST IS'NT RIGHT MAN THAT JUST IS'NT RIGHT
1029165 So can unicorns, with magic. Now please go away, your inferiority is starting to smell. Gegrüßet seist du Equestria! Vaterland des Master-Einhorn Rennen!
Dude, seriously, who the f#!@ are you?! You really care this much about this stuff? They're small talking ponies. Also, are you racist in real life?