This is horrible! There are are many reasons why it is, but for the sake of time, I'm going to limit myself to just three. 1: Rape. Rape is always awful, but when you also rape a child right in front of her mother, that's just one of the worst things ever! 2: The torture. Blood and gore isn't necessarily bad, but it needs to have a point. There isn't much point to this torture. Even if they're trying to teach Berry Punch a lesson, it doesn't make much sense. Which brings me to number three. 3: Berry Pinch's death. I understand that they're trying to them a lesson, but why did they kill her? She obviously got more business than her mother, so it would have been smarter just to rape her and have to mother watch helplessly. This story is terrible because of its subject matter, characters, and overall tone. I would say sorry for being a troll, but being a troll is much better than liking this story.
HAHAHA, awesome.
It's an interesting concept, and could have even been a decent story if it wasn't so mind-numbingly cruel.
Ooooohh...Intersteing!
*Reads it*
That was actually kinda cool. Great job at weirding me the fuck out!
Grimdark's are good. All hail the master.
This is horrible! There are are many reasons why it is, but for the sake of time, I'm going to limit myself to just three. 1: Rape. Rape is always awful, but when you also rape a child right in front of her mother, that's just one of the worst things ever! 2: The torture. Blood and gore isn't necessarily bad, but it needs to have a point. There isn't much point to this torture. Even if they're trying to teach Berry Punch a lesson, it doesn't make much sense. Which brings me to number three. 3: Berry Pinch's death. I understand that they're trying to them a lesson, but why did they kill her? She obviously got more business than her mother, so it would have been smarter just to rape her and have to mother watch helplessly. This story is terrible because of its subject matter, characters, and overall tone. I would say sorry for being a troll, but being a troll is much better than liking this story.
1029672 umm dont get me wrong those are valid reasons but why did you read this if you dont like this stuff