Rarity sets Rainbow Dash on a date with the boy she likes. Because Rainbow thinks he's only into girly girls, Rarity gives her a makeover. Or tries to, but she discovers Rainbow doesn't wash often, so first she has to give her a bath!
Contains: Olfactophilia, soap/washing, butt scrubbing, farts, and light, non-descriptive watersports. None of these are present in the makeover chapter, nor is nudity in any of them. I'd advise against reading this story if the last two fetishes are a turn-off for you, but I don't think it's enough for a Porn tag. It's actually more meant to illustrate how "dirty" Rainbow Dash is in this story.
This story started out as an RP I did (on a different site, of course) with OtakuBrony47. So, credit to him as co-author with me. I was Rainbow and he was Rarity. This particular one was so fun and had enough of a story to it that I wanted to adapt it into a fanfic, and he said he'd like to see it. I did make a few changes but he's fine with that. I hope he enjoys this story!
I know the scenario's pretty stretchy, she's almost certainly not really like this in canon, nor do I even headcanon that she is. To the point that I gave it an Alt. Universe tag. So, don't take too seriously.
good work on all chapters.
I really enjoyed this. You should definitely do more like it.
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Any parts in particular? The whole irony thing, the makeover, or the whole dirty/smelly thing, or a combination of all of them?
And thanks for enjoying the story.
Great job. You did great.
Don't know why they are so many dislikes though.
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Thanks.
People downvote fetish stories based on the content without even reading them.
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A mix between the dirty/smelly thing and makeover. I don't know, but I just find the idea of a tomboyish girl like Rainbow Dash getting all gussied up like that really cute.
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So do I. That's why I included the full makeover chapter.
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Well that's mean.
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Nothing we can do about them, and at least it's better than hurtful comments.
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Yes. True.
If anyone suddenly can't find the sequel story "The Adventures of Smelly Rainbow Dash", it must be because you have mature content filter on, because my latest chapter forced me to change the rating to Mature just to be safe.
I can't shake the feeling She's All Yak was based off this, just in a cleaner way obviously. If not for Rarity giving Yona a bath, I'd say it was coincidence because the moral is expected of this show. I know I've heard the writers are forbidden from reading fanfics to avoid drama if it inspires them, but still. It's like that story about Rainbow Dash and Rarity questioning why they're friends, which, unlike The End in Friend many years later, depicts both of them farting, Rainbow Dash to set the plot in motion, and Rarity at the end.
I'm not gonna make a big deal about it but I really hope I don't attract unwanted attention from the fans who dislike this kind of thing.
Edit: They did it again where Rainbow Dash wears Bulk Biceps' smelly sock making it seem like the smell is coming from her (she even has to specify it isn't, while blushing). That can't be coincidence. They read this story. Again, I hope this story stays hidden from people who wouldn't like it. If it does (as it seems is the case with She's All Yak), I'll be less uneasy about this.
I might have liked it too if the smell was actually coming from her.