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The Dark Wolf


This is the name I use to express my fetishes. And my platonic wam interest.

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The Main 6 have a picnic together. It seems like a regular relaxing day, except that Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash put fart powder in the cupcakes and the cider, causing the ponies to fart uncontrollable, much to the amusement of Rainbow and Pinkie, the annoyance of Applejack, and the embarrassment of Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy. Rainbow and Pinkie convince the other four to have a farting contest with them. Which pony will outfart the others?

Contains: Fart (obviously). If you don't like it, read something else and don't even comment. If you either find it funny or have a fetish for it, read on!

I did this because my fart stories are generally better received than my stories involving watersports, in part because some people just find them funny and can appreciate them the same as those with the fetish. This time will use all of the Main 6.

As usual, if any of the ponies seem too OoC or the scenarios seem too unlikely, don't take it too seriously, this was just written for fun. I do try to keep them a little in character though, like 28 Pranks Later shows Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie think farts are funny while Applejack is unamused, calling whoopee cushions (and therefore fart jokes in general) a "joke shortcut".

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Have a like just for the utter ridiculousness. but I would've had it that the contest was won by spike farting in his sleep :moustache: because any of the others could be predicted, with fluttershy being the most predictable and rarity in second place.

7897321 For once one of my stories has more likes than dislikes

And thanks for reminding me Spike was there at the beginning, I forgot to put one line in at the end

7897401 but did he eat any of the cupcakes?

7897438 Up to you whether he either missed out on them for the punch, or did eat some of them and will feel their effects later

Should I have had Rarity win the contest instead? (It came down to either her or Fluttershy because they'd be the least expected to, I'd like to think they fart silently in canon)

My biggest issue with this is that it has an awkward start, then it's just very slow consistent escalation with no satisfying climax. It's the story equivalent of saying hi to someone and then riding an escalator. There's some good ideas in there with how the ponies feel differently about it, but it all becomes moot and gets drowned out by extremely repetitive and predictable elements.

7913565 This is my ninth story, and if my writing hasn't improved, this is a good sign I should stop

If anyone's wondering what happened to my tenth story, I revoked the submission. It was stupid writing another one, and it had the worst ratio of dislikes yet. As opposed to this one which has more likes than dislikes, which is rare in my stories.

How are none of them gagging? :twilightoops:

Welp, have a like for making me spit on my computer from laughing.

This was an interesting story. Seeing the mane six, especially Rainbiw dash, fart, was really cool.

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