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I think that was very well done. I actually half expected Zecora to burst into tears as she was kissing Trixie. That's how well you were able to show such an inner turmoil.
In this version of Equestria, I wouldn't be surprised if that's the standard/default response to that kind of vulgarity.
Well, that and this:
"Suck my dick!"
"Whip it out bitch, I'll make you wanna marry me."
Also, I feel I should ask, just how far are you planning to go with this story? In a universe like this one, I can see the changeling invasion having a very different outcome compared to what it was in the cannon timeline. Then again, it could go pretty much the same, depending on how you decide to spin it.
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Aww. Thank you so much. I'll be honest, my writing frequently wants to go the overly emotional route and I frequently have to pull myself back.
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Precisely.
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No idea. I guess just as long as I have ideas. For instance, Fluttershy's pet changeling.
nice chapter.
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Appreciated.
i loved it theses are awesome
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I think so, too.
So I've been re-reading the chapters and I noticed something, that the cocks sizes are kind of inconsistent. Like in chapter 2 were told that Rarity's longer than Twilight, but in chapter 19 it's the opposite. Or how in chapter 6 Rainbow is said to several times smaller than the average earth pony, then came chapter 9 were it's called well above average.
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Yeah, I was worried something like that might happen. Not sure what to tell you, though.
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The measurement of the cast could be given?
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I'll see what I can do.
Should say “pointed at Trixie“, because it took me a few minutes to realize who was speaking. I thought it was still AJ.
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My bad.