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HA!!!!!
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Yeah. That was some juicy low hanging fruit. Also, damn! That was fast.
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Well I AM A Fast reader.
I thought only ponies were the ultra sexualized race in this story. Are all the races of this world so indulgent?
This was interesting to be sure. I do find it fun how the interaction with the dragon went and that it seems that while the dragon's look was sexualize it wasn't AS sexually charged as the ponies are and it seems to be a known thing throughout the world that Molestia is..... well VERY sexual lol. The thing I always find to be interesting and something that we never get to really see I kinda hope to get more addressed in this is well..... ARE the ponies the good guys in this? I mean yea the dragon was causing some major issues with her snoring but she was looking for a home. Sure she could have picked a better spot but they found a still sane wild dragon that might have been looking for a home for who knows how long. But was then chased off by those little creatures after they kinda rudely woke her up. Not saying she is all in the right but I mean they have a number of powerful unicorns. They really couldn't have thought of a way to deal with smog? And on top of that the dragon lost its whole hoard and its new home. With Fluttershy being the anchor for all of that happening. She might feel a way about that. There is also is NOW the dynamic between AJ and Rarity that could be addressed. That relationship is now strained for sure. To AJ someone who value all her friends and lovers greatly to be abandoned by Rarity as she was would be a huge blow to her. And Rarity being her might see she did wrong but has problems admitting it. Overall a fun chapter and I can't wait to see more. If we follow the format the next one could be a Rarity episode so it could be a chance to show more of Rarity beside her Dom side and get a bit more development of her character for the Doming thing is the MOST predominate thing about her as of now. I just think seeing more of her relationship with Sweetie, the other girls, and Spike would be great to see.
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Nope. In fact, that's a plot point in a future episode/story arc.
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I find that the best proof of a story's success is how much it makes the readers think, which this one clearly did. That said, I kinda have to defend Rarity here. No one expected the dragon to eat AJ. When that happened, Rarity tried to put up a front, realized what she was dealing with, and made a tactical retreat because there was no other option. Also, what happened with the dragon wasn't as bad as you seem to think. This sort of thing happens between dragons all the time. The only thing different here, from the dragon's perspective, is the embarrassment of being beaten by such stereotypically weak creatures.
Ok, but some elements kept me from really enjoying these last few chapters. Twilight seems to be switching from jerk to down right stupid. Why not bring the elements? Because those are Equestrias most power weapons and are gems that the dragon could eat if given the chance. There!
I dont know. The jerky nature here seemed ramped up to 30 on a scale from 1 to 10.
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So the dragon says she understands their plight, knows that an entire country will die if she doesn't find some other cave to sleep in, but says she doesn't see how it's her problem and you wonder who the villains are?