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This chapter was well done. It fit the story beats perfectly.
The Harmony is finally aligned in these two!
Great work, friend.
This was honestly great. It was a nice character development chapter for the Twi household. It really got us to see the dynamic between everyone and where their places are in this group. It also advanced their placements with one another and deepened the overall bonds without avoiding any major issues that might have been around for all of them for sure. I do like that we might get a slightly more healthy dynamic between Twi and Trixie a bit more. I can't wait to see someone try to talk shit to/about her infront of Twilight. I think they are so close now that she will be SUPER pissed like if someone did something to Spike. Well almost there still feels to be a closeness there between them that I don't think any other relationship in the story can really match. My only thing is I did kinda feel sorry for Spike, when sex started to happen he kinda just felt like he didn't have as much impact on Twilight as Trixie could give her. It really seems that he can't fuck the mane 6 the way he might wish he could. He can be fucked by them sure but he can't work them the same way he can the CMC. But that is just a silly little thing in my thoughts. Tho it seems Twilight got a new power and this one IS major. To link people's connections and senses during intimacy could be a major thing and I can see growing into one of her main powers. think of how she could unite people with such a gift.
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Yeah, this trio has such a fun dynamic.
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Much appreciated, and yes. It feels good to finally set some permanent character development.
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As always, it's great to hear from you. Trixie makes the dynamic duo of Spike and Twilight into an even more fun trio. However, I intended that Spike purposefully stepped aside during the sex because the point was reconciliation between the mares. He's already reasonably comfortable with his role in Twilight's life, but there may be chances for that to change later. Also, I wouldn't really call that a power. It's an advanced skill that any unicorn could learn.