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Great chapter I really like how you talked about the outfits and how they fit each character. But not just that but how they also fit each character in THIS world. How they were very cute sounding but also hints of the erotic nature of this world as well. I am still wondering how things will go with Trixie in this world. I liked to see people step up for her in this and not treat her as just a slave. I am hoping with all she has done she will earn her freedom soon and if anything she decides to hang around not as a slave but as a friend or at least make the town a home base as she goes back on the road. She did lose a big part of herself by giving up being a showmare and touring all around. I honestly think a episode about her and her talking to maybe Spike or Gilda about her missing that. That having a home is nice but she might also be feeling trapped a bit that she can't see the world and explore like she use to. Something that she could get Spike or Gilda thinking about. I think Spike works better as Gilda can go out on her own if she wants to she decides to stay there with Dash. Spike tho, still doesn't know anything about dragon nature and culture. And is more of a pony than a dragon something that could start to make her curious about. I really like how you handled Rarity in this as well, how we got to see different sides of her not just the cruel dom but the slightly overworked mare that still tries to do her best as well
Very nice, lip to lip.😂
For future reference it’s voila. Not V-walla. It’s French for “there it is“ or “there you are” and it’s synonymous with “see“ and “presto“. In this context Rarity was saying presto when revealing the dresses.
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I'm digging these ideas. Seeds have been planted in my head, so we'll see what they grow into. Trixie is definitely becoming more accepted and accepting of her situation, and I especially love pairing her with Spike as a comedic duo to keep Twilight in line. Should Trixie mention a desire to leave, I can see a falling out between her and Twilight, culminating with the latter admitting she'd miss Trixie if she left.
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Wordplay is always fun.
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Noted, and thanks.