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Yes! It has returned! I have waited for so long for this to make a comeback!
You know, judging by what this chapter implied about where Scootaloo grew up, it sounds like her aunts got raped a lot. Now in this setting, getting raped once isn't really a big deal, but if it happens over and over it would be seen as a form of bullying, which would leave someone with some lingering issues regarding sex.
I know I sound like a broken record at this point... But i really love how you write Spike in this series and in general. It is so great to see him an dhow you make him interact with the the case is fun and honestly... he feel SOO much more relatable to me than any other character in the story. It is best chance because he is the only other guy around so it is a easy connection. I do love what you have done with the CMC as well. I think Scoot having issues with sex in her own way is great for her as it shows that not EVERYONE, even ponies, have a easy time with sex which I think is nice to see. Sweetie who is honestly a bit of a dramatic much like her sister is nice as well since she isn't as connected to them as she doesn't live in town (yet) but we can see the chance of a strong bond forming there one day, or she starts to lean more towards a video game addicted pony tho I like her with Spike more. And then there is AB who is around Spike the most and has clearly made the strongest connection with him so far out of everyone.
With the CMC formed now and Spike being like a honorary member or something like that I can see some fun events happening with them for sure and him growing from his connection with them as well. I do hope we still get to see him connect with the main girls alot tho. Mostly honestly Twilight and Rarity. I feel those two have such a strong connection with our Dragon here that anytime he gets to be with them it is always amazing. I think seeing some real moments with him and Rarity would be nice. She is kinda... well more of a boogey man it seems to me than someone who is a friend to any of the girls and even more so to Spike. I think seeing more of her would be fun. Tho deep down I am a Sparity main since that is what got me into the series to start with.
If I could ever make a hope for a story to see would be a Spike x Rarity one. Like a milf our cougar Rarity meeting back up with a older Spike after some years apart. I know it has been done a few times but it is always some of my favorite set ups. Like a Rarity that is married, kids, the life she always felt she wanted but then... this person from her past shows up. The person who knows her better than anyone and it becomes a torrent of love, taboo, shame, and desire lol. Just a idea that I feel any author could make it amazing it would be you.
Anyway great chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
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I was going for more of a misunderstanding approach. As in, she and the guy didn't communicate too well, Troubleshoes was too big, one thing led to another, and the one aunt decided to swear off dudes.
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Tropes are common because they're popular. They're premises that a lot of people just enjoy, so writers give their audience what they want. That's how I feel about your fanboying over Spike. It's just as much fun for me to write him, as it was to flesh out the CMC. Sweetie and Scoot are both awkward outsiders in their own way, so it makes sense that they'd gravitate to the oddball dragon and the filly also feeling like an outsider. I look forward to expanding on all four in the future, and seeing about expanding their club as well.
The dark ages have finally past, may we enter a new era that will be some much brighter.
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Damn, I wish I had that kind of optimism. Oh, well. If you guys keep giving me yours, I might be able to fake it 'til I make it.
Sounds like BDSM is one of Apple Bloom's turn offs.
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She might not be as into it, but I wouldn't say it's a turnoff.