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Nice work on the original chapter concept. Can't wait to see what;s next.
Very nice chapter, loved how in character the lines felt while still in a much sluttier twist. On another note, what with the mention of Spike's feminine hips, "licking the tip like a clit" and his fondness for marecock, I have to wonder if we'll ever get a point where Spike gets to be on the receiving end of some vaginal action.
Nice chapter I really enjoyed seeing how this one went. I honestly find it funny how much I like your Dash than the canon one. She just seems so much more chill, responsible, and overall a better character than the jerk the original one was. I don't hate it when yours show up like I did with the canon one lol. I did love how this one worked around Scoot and it involved both Spike and Dash. I am still happy to see how you have Spike playing a important part of the story, something I feel he should have had in the canon. I do wonder about the next time we will get to see Twilight and Spike share a moment, I felt they had some of the strongest chemistry there out of everyone and I still really want to see that built on. Tho I do wonder as well about both of their relationships with Molestia. Anyway that is the sign of a good story when I keep wanting more from all over the place lol.
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Likewise. I think I'll be doing interludes like these more often.
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You're not the first to pay me that compliment, so I guess it must be true. Whether it's Gravity Falls, Steven Universe, or MLP, I suppose I just have a way of capturing a character's voice. Mmm... maybe. It's certainly possible, but the primary idea is that he's a pretty boy that the mares love.
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That's funny and nice to hear. I'd like to think that all of my characters are more reasonable than their canon counterparts, except when I deliberately change things to interject some conflict. We can't have things go too easily for these guys, or else the story has no stakes. I plan on doing more of these original interludes between episodes, so there'll be plenty of opportunity for more interactions. As for Spike and Twilight, I agree. I imagine by moments, you mean in Show Stoppers where Spike took care of Twilight. That was cute. However, their relationship is kinda at the level where they often take each other for granted, despite having such strong feelings. They acknowledge that the other is special, but they've yet to figure out to what extent. That won't happen until sometime after Dragon Quest. In the meantime, I have a whole bunch of other characters to play off each other and see what happens. As for Molestia, I hope my plans are relatively unique. She's less of a benevolent, all-knowing goddess and more of a mad/brilliant tyrant that everyone has to tolerate.
As always, thanks to everyone for your kind words.