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I just have to say I like the Rainbow Dash version of 'Slavery' and I feel it was needed to be added to the story. You were for sure right about your break down on how each of the three view slavery and as someone more of a fan of the intimate I really like hearing about Dash and Gilda in comparison to the others. I think the whole 'Slave' arch is done for now until something comes up to build or draw on it more. I can't help but wonder what will be the next issue they will have to address . There are a few of the girls we haven't heard or seen anything from in a while this could be a chance to build on them. You know me I am always in favor of some scene/moments with Spike lol. So either way I like how you handled it at the end here and who knows this is a punishment for Trixie doesn't mean it is a life sentence. And she could always take what she learns and go back on the road to improve her act. I do think it is funny how Twi tho said it was all hard work, which is true. But she also kinda has to see that not everyone get the blessing to SPEND all their life living in a book. Most have to work and struggle just to get by, what she more or less admitted was she was lucky to come form a well off family, be picked, and than have all her burdens taken care of so she can focus on only studying. I know this isn't going to be a issue brought up in the story it was just something I couldn't help but think when she mentioned that .
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Always nice to hear from this story's biggest fan. But yes, after this we'll be getting back to the canon episodes, just with this new character dynamic in place. I'd also agree to preferring the intimate stuff, but part of the fun of a world of free sex is that there's a lot of perspectives and preferences to play with.
I also know which characters you're talking about, and its honestly because I'm just not too sure what to do with them most of the time. Generally I'm taking the base plot of an episode and either twisting it around or expanding on it. If one of our leads isn't there to begin with, then I'm unlikely to add them.
And finally, I think I'll just tease that you'll probably like my rendition of Call of the Cutie.
A bit light on the pron in this chapter. The chapter was actually over before I finished, so I had to go back to some prior chapters. I know there's always going to be lulls in the good stuff, but hopefully things will be getting hotter by next chapter.
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Wow. Never expected to get a complaint about too much story in a clop story, but I guess it was inevitable.
Havd you ever thought of doing a human version of this and the first one?
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Nope. That would not contribute anything substantial and would only add limitations.