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I feel like this episode is gonna be a long one. We're one chapter in, and we haven't started getting the cutie mark stories from any of the Mane 6 yet.
It's not like Diamond likes AB or anything.
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B-B-Baka!
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Wrong episode. That happens after the CMC are established, which has yet to happen.
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Of course, not. That would be absurd and utterly impossibly, dummy.
Nice I really like this. As I assume you know I am a sucker for Spike chapter and this is super fun. Not only as we getting more on the CMC and their friends but we are seeing more development in character thrown to the side. I honestly feel tho that Twist shouldn't be written out of this. I always felt it was a shame to get the cute adorkable character thrown away just because of something like that. She would have been great for the cast I say. It just feels like AB got rid of her first friend for her new ones in the canon. I would honestly love it if Pinkie or Spike bought her, I thought that was why AB went to Spike in the first place to see if he could help with the situation. It is also nice to have Sweetie now going to be a regular. Tho I think it would be great if she start to develop feelings for Spike as well and he bonds with the two of them. I see Scoot being more into Dash and her private group than anyone lol. And hell I can see Spike taking his little harem to see Shy and she would love to be to the focus of a bunch of young ones... tho I think she would be more prone to hang out with the teacher and be gangbanged by all the male students in the class lol. But either way I am loving this little area and I hope we can see more of it and things like this soon.
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We can agree on the Spike front. He's just so fun to write. Snarky yet helpful. Lots of things to establish here and I think I pulled it off pretty well. Twist just never really clicked with me and while I did toy with the idea of keeping her around, nothing came to mind. Sorry.
Thus, the CMC is born!
Great chapter as always. Nice changes here and there.
Smooth transition with Twist; Though her future fate is debatable. (Foresight IS awesome.) And, yes I agree that AB and DT's family's relationship should've been been more accounted in the original series. Another extra points for that!
Hope to see more smooth AB and Dt's relationships in the future!
Are you going to tackle the Sonic Rainboom episode next?
If so, you should consider the plot suggested by Alphamon_Ouryuken in My little Orgy 1
Sonic Rainboom:
RD ha been practicing the most powerful technique that promises immediate orgasm from those with less-than alicorn-level endurance. She just needs to stop passing out before she can do it...
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Thank you very much. It's been a lot of fun making all of these little tweaks.
As for the next episode, I'll not be doing the Sonic Rainboom just yet. Haven't even started it, but I have that premise already written down as a basis to work from. I'm a discovery writer, so I don't actually know what'll happen until my fingers start moving. We'll just have to wait and see.
This was good.
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Glad to entertain
This poor fic seems to have died. Oh well, it was good while it lasted.