Great chapter I do really love seeing even moments of the girls just being friends and supportive with one another. It still gives off the feeling the canon show while also making it nice and sexy as well. I do like how Trixie doesn't like Molestia and that totally made sense she is the one that made her into a slave. I do like how this got us one of the rare moments of Rarity and Dash interacting with one another. I still love that your Dash to me is so much better than the canon one.

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Nail on the head on all fronts. Good old casual interactions are always some of the most fun parts to write, and I kind of keep your initial comment about RD at the back of my head at all times, always striving to make her the best she can be. Then again, I'd like to think I do the same for the others, exaggerating their personalities for drama and comedy, but keeping them grounded and sensible where it counts.