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Another great chapter and arch. I do like how you make it where Twilight has enough personal reflection to know she counts on Spike too much. I like this both for her character AND it makes it where Spike's effect isn't diminished. It shows the massive effect he has had on Twi's life . I think this could be good as it will open them up to see each other as not just partners but as something deeper between each other or at least deepen their already close relationship. It will also give us more chances for Spike adventures or being apart of her adventures as well. I would love to see some Sparity moments in the future or Spike starting to use his own talents and hobbies as well to develop into his own character. I think we could use a adventure of the girls (+ Spike) soon. I think a event that needs them all to address it would be fun. I honestly can't wait for Spike's birthday. How fun would it be if it turns out he is older than everyone thought he was. It could get ride of the Twi and Spike mother/son relationship with them growing up being closer to age than most thought. OR seeing him interact with Celestia more. I still think she might secretly see him as her son, seeing how she was more than likely a major factor in his being raised. And unlike Twi's mom Celestia doesn't have kids (we think) So her having a child who will live a long time and can take her sun like heat would be super cool. I could see a funny event with Twi having to hang out with Pinkie seeing how they don't really interact much .I think it would be fun for Twilight to get to see Pinkie is more than just a silly mare but is much deeper than that. I still STRONGLY ship Pinkie and Cheese tho. They are too cute together lol
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Great to hear from you, as always, and I largely agree. These changes to all the characters have been a lot of fun, but especially Spike. The little dude is finally getting the credit he deserves, yet there's still room for more. I also look forward to the next opportunity to send him on an adventure with the others. However, I also have to balance things so he's not overexposed and becomes the main character. Likewise, I'm still debating precisely what kind of relationship I want him and Twilight to have. One story I read flat out asked why everyone is so obsessed with giving the relationship a name and why people can't just accept the two are precious to each other. However, for the sake of this kinky universe, I think a name is needed.
Sparity will be nice. However, since my Rarity prefers adults, she may be more direct with her feelings and say Spike should consider Sweetie as an alternative for something serious.
And although it's still a ways off, I think you'll appreciate the Pinkie sense episode. Trixie gets a lot of highlights.
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This is all totally fine and I fully get it. I think honestly the CMC and maybe some others that could come in later are Spike's special group and that he is close to. I am just a sucker for Sparity but I am not honestly dying for it in this because Rarity feels so distant from him with her taste. And I think while he thinks she is beautiful that her... Taste might be too much for him to want to have all the time lol. While the CMC seem to really like the drake for who he is. Hell out of all the Mane girls I think Twilight and Shy are the ones that would be the closest to him. But you are right. He doesn't need to be a MAIN character when this is mostly about the girls. I like how you made him a very strong other character. So even if he isn't one of the heroes it does feel like he has agency and is a large factor of things and that is great.
I do think you are right. Twi and Spike don't need to put a label on their relationship. They have been around each other for a long time and it is honestly clear they don't see each other as siblings or a parent/child way at least not enough to be the foundation of their relationship and I think that is good. I just always liked the Celestia and Spike thing as I see them as two people who find comfort in one another and she seems like the type to like to have a son. Even this Molestia lol.
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The CMC are the close friends his age, but of the adults, I'd say he's closer to Trixie than Shy. Sure, he's Shy's fetish, but I like the dynamic I've built with him and Trixie. They're funny together, and I've been throwing in hints that she really appreciates him. Then again, as I write this, I realize I should probably do more interactions with Spike and Shy. I also realize the sleepover chapter would be ideal for this, so that's something to look forward to. With that said, I'm amused that my Spike has stolen AJ's spot as the best secondary character.
And while I agree that Spike should also interact more with the Princesses, I'm just not seeing much of an attraction between these versions of the characters. They can hang out, but based on what's been established, I don't see a basis for a stronger connection. Also, Cheese is lightyears away, so no promises one way or the other, but I'll try to keep the ship in mind.