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I am happy to see you are back to writing. Honestly I LOVED this chapter. I started thinking when Spike started to talk to Twi after there kiss, he is right they have never shared a real moment. I then found it odd. Out of ALL the girls, all her friends she should be closest to Spike. He has been the one there with her for most of her life, he has been there through all her training and has been her partner the most. But it has always been more of just a act of lust than anything of feeling. This is the first time we have seen them show care for one another even if Spike got a bit into it lol. But I think THIS could be a changing point. Also I think it showed great signs for Spike as well, as much as he doesn't mind being the sub he doesn't always like it. I mean as a dragon there is no way he could always like being used by others and not getting a chance to be dominate. And this was the first time he got a chance to let that out. I honestly hope the CMC get to go to the ball with the girls and they get to spend some time with Spike. Let him have some moments with those who are close to him.
One chapter or arc I would LOVE to see honestly if the Mane 6 get changed into fillies. I mean with them Spike tends to be the bottom or dominated by them. But what if that was flipped. What if they were on even playing fields in terms of size. And not just him but the CMC get a chance at some payback at the older mares who tend to dominate them. I could so see Sweetie and Spike just dominating Rarity for a change lol. And we know Spike WILL get his chance when his greed growth start to happen when he will be able to change his size. Lol what will the girls do when they are face to face with a 8 foot tall horny dragon with a dick(s) the size and thickness of a tree branch or trunk lol.
Anyway great chapter and as a Spike fan I can't wait to see what is next for him the the gang.
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To an extent.
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Thanks for the watch and the long comment. Keep in mind I'm not only working within the confines of the show, but the twisted version as depicted by My Little Orgy 1. That Twilight was WAY more antisocial than her canon counterpart, and I think that actually makes for some more interesting story opportunities. This shakeup to the prior status quo of her life is causing Twilight to see things in a whole new light, including her relationship with Spike. Same goes for him. It's like the characters had been under the impression their relationship had been at one level this entire time, only to wake up and find it's somewhere else entirely. That's a pretty scary thought that'll take time to adjust to. But in the short term, Spike will get the chance to top every now and then.
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That sounds great honestly. I mean that makes alot of sense. As Twi said Celestia taught her the details of sex but not the emotional side of it, the connections, the bonding, how sex is more than just satisfying lust but is so so much more. And as she and Spike are learning and growing from their experiences and time on their own they will start to see how their once very simple bond is so much more than they ever thought it was. I mean no one will know those two better than they know each other, and not even just sexual but emotional, mentality, and overall just everything about one another. I mean what if Spike start to feel he is being replaced in Twi's life? Size wise he isn't as large as the girls, for now, and he can't have sex with her the way she would like it? How will Twi react is Spike start to pull away from her, doing things on his own, making his own personal connections how will she feel when the constant in her life feel it is pulling away from her? There are so many interesting questions and possibilities between these two. That is why honestly to me THEY are the most interesting part of the story. Their dynamic and relationship feel so much more important and impactful compared to really any of the other girls with Twilight.
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Hmm. Twi and Spike being the leads? Hmm. I'll have to think on that. I've already written a few chapters ahead, introducing the beginnings of the "Spike feeling replaced" ark early. My intention is to draw it out over several chapters with sidelong glances and the like, culminating in Spike and Twilight giving their relationship a formal title. I won't say what that title is, but I will give one spoiler. The one to make Spike feel like he's being replaced isn't some owl who's just there for the sake of being there.
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Ohhh that is super interesting and that is so much better than the canon. It will be more believable that just in a day or two Spike would start to believe he is going to be replaced. No it will take time for those feelings and thoughts to grow and fester. I mean man your oldest and closest friend replacing you, you have given everything for that person and they have found someone else. But wait, are those feelings of hurt and lost JUST from losing a friend...or .... is it something more something deeper that makes this hurt just so much lol.
Sometimes, kisses can be really magical when they are done right!
I am glad you are back!
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As am I.
U know what will be messed up, if Garble and his friends show up, torment Spike for his small cock size and molest (hopefully not rape) the gang with him being unable to do anything.
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Probably won't happen. I'm not into that kind of dark stuff.
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Just thought of it as possibility, since you mention spike going through some development and you adapting season 2.
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Let's see if I can make it to season 2, first. Lots of episodes are growing into 2 or 3 parters.