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Is there a reason why Twilight is becoming more and more disk-ish with every chapter?
This chapter honestly made me laugh harder than I expected it to, especially the scenes with Pinkie and Spike.
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I don't know what that means, so maybe.
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Always great to hear that my jokes aren't as terrible as I fear. Thank you.
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Sorry, phone auto corrected. What I meant to say is dick-ish.
This is something I have been noticing more and more with this story ever since it was slammed in my face when Twilight said to just sell Zecora. There's just this undercurrent of nastiness (or feeling nasty) or uncaring that when Twilight brought up AJ I couldn't help but think that the only fucking they would have would be hate fucking.
There's being socially awkward and then there's this.
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Twilight is meant to be majorly socially oblivious, but she's not meant to be that bad. She's grappling with a bunch of new concepts, but is trying to do better with her support group. Mostly, this is centered around her relationship with Trixie, which will eventually come to a head. Hopefully, her attitude evens out by then. Also, this is set in a world similar to the old Molestia comic on Tumblr, in which things like rape are just accepted as part of life. If you'd like, Twilight is most likely overcompensating while trying to adapt to this culture. However, I don't mean for her to come off as that bad. I'll try to work on that later, or at least have others call her out on it more.
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Well, it doesn't help when you have a narcissistic like Trixie coming off as the more caring or understanding while Twilight comes off as ignorant over everything around her and unwilling to really learn.
The more I think about it, that seems to be the problem. We're not seeing Twilight learning more about her new position as Trixie's master, more like she's just annoyed to have another mouth to feed. We're not seeing her study on being a slave owner, giving Trixie hours long lectures on being a slave based on her research. It's just this ongoing grumpiness and clueless behavior that makes her seem like an asshole.
If she has time to read a book on how to run in a race, she has time to study and improve herself in other matters
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Those are all good points. Now that I think about it, I suppose introverted Twilight is resentful about this intruder in her space. I'll admit that even I'm annoyed by how I've written her not learning as fast as I'd like, but she will get better. That, I swear. Thanks for bringing up this shortcoming so I can better address it in the upcoming chapters. A confrontation about Twilight's resentment about someone who's unwillingly obligated to be there sounds like a pretty solid premise for a chapter, actually. I'll get on that.
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That's good to hear.