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This was a nice chapter to be sure. I really liked the Rarity and AJ interactions. It feels like I can see them much more as friends now with them having developed a deeper understanding of one another and their view points of how they handle intimacy.It is also kinda funny to see how kinda.... crazy Molestia is. Or at least she is showing more of her unfiltered side around Spike and Luna and that is refreshing to see for sure. Tho I do feel that honestly... She kinda dismissed Spike and his feelings on the matter. It felt like she was going on that he is mostly just a cock sleeve and that him being home and out of the way is best for him. I think also that he went off on Twi having the elements, which is nice that he care for Twi as that is still tied for my second fav pairing in the story, but I think his biggest thing should have been his chance to miss out on interacting and meeting one of his kind. And not to mention how Molestia constantly told him that he couldn't provide any help when it was needed could be a real sticking point with him about that talk. Overall really great chapter with some fun growth from Rarity and AJ I can't wait to see the next chapter.
The one thing I don't get is why does this story not have more upvotes?
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The character interactions are definitely the most fun for me to write, so I'm glad everyone else is enjoying them as well. As for Molly, that's just how she is. She's a big departure from her canon counterpart, being pretty selfish and hedonistic. What you saw here is just a hint at what I have planned.
Now, onward to the zebra!
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I think it's the 2. Sequels tend to get fewer views because lots of people don't want to read the backstory to catch up. Also I might be combining a lot of niche fetishes that end up appealing to an even smaller audience.
Somehow I really hope Spike could have ended up spit-roasted between the Princesses but that may play out into the future. Man, I wanted to know what Luna would have done to Spike, oh, well.
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Sorry, but at this point in the timeline, Lunaughty has yet to regain her dick. She didn't have it in the original, which is what I'm basing this off of, but don't worry. She still has ways, and a whole chapter all to herself in the future.