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Can't wait for the race!
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No, you cannot. It's a lot of fun.
This is so mind blowing to me... I normally HATE Dash if I am honest. I find her to be a pain in the ass the one who felt like she grew the least to me out of all the girls. But this Dash is great. She cares about others feels just naturally, she feels MORE loyal than the cannon one, and she is overall just feels more like a adult. I do think that we are getting hints of the canon relationship of Dash and AJ and I am honestly all for it tho I think Gilda also has a big place in that relationship as well. Overall I think once again this is another chapter that has done an amazing job showing off the characters and making them feel so much more defined than even the canon did. And this wouldn't be a comment from me if I didn't add something about Spike lol. Since he wasn't massive in this one I can't say much just want to say I did love how Twi still shows to be very clingy a bit when it comes to Spike and the hints of that VERY deep relationship is still there in the story which I love.
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Yeah, that seems to be my trend for these kinds of rewrite fanfics. Everyone is slightly more reasonable, and a lot more sexual. I'm glad to hear how much you're digging this reimagined Dash, and I think you'll be even more glad once the race concludes.
Keep in mind that, officially, AJ and Twilight are dating at this point, but nothing is exclusive. At some point, they may all end up in a giant herd, but that's too far off to say with any certainty.
Spike is present in this episode, but mostly in the background. I also enjoy writing these moments of caring between him and Twi.