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This was a very interesting chapter to be sure. Things got alittle crazy at Rarity's shop but to me the big stand outs were honestly the rest of the interactions in town. I like seeing Gilda and Trixie interact. The two can interact in a way no one else can and while the two are more or less in the same place one is getting what she wants while the other one is quietly... kinda quietly, suffering with this new situation she finds herself in. And worse is due to the culture of the lands no on will really sympathize and just see it as something she has to get over and move on.
I think the Zecora and Shy thing was cute as well. Shy does seem like the type to hold on to her fucked up views the longest out of fear and dread of something foreign and different. But it is nice to se them get along a bit better even if that still lingers. Honestly if I had my wish, I would love to see a male Zebra show up and maybe connect with Zecora. We could get alot more about Zebra culture and maybe even visit them. Have the girls be on the other foot and seen as the outcast and the dangerous ones, have their culture be called into question. But most of all I think seeing Zecora be with a male Zebra would be great and having one in town would be fun. Have a black coded male character around instead of just the token black woman who is treated like a outcast and lives in a hut in the woods alone would be very nice. And a BBC never hurt lol. There could be more to Zebra culture than we have seen.
I think the thing with AJ could have more impact than we are thinking. In the show the fame of the girls really didn't start to come into play till near the end. But in this they are spreading far faster and becoming much more of a household name. We could see how that could effect their lives both in the positive and negative. Lets be real some would like the fame... But others like Shy and AJ never wanted that and it could be very disruptive in their lives. Not to mention while Pinkie might like the fame what about her super traditional rock farming parents? They might not like seeing their girl with a full spread in Playcolt lol.
This chapter was fun for the most part and enjoyed it but most of all it got me thinking of some things that could really come about and build in this AU.
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Always good to hear. Sometimes, it feels like I'm writing this story specifically for you as you've got the meatiest feedback.
Don't worry too much about Trixie, as she will soon endear herself to her mistress and be in for some much better treatment. Also, yes, her interactions are a lot of fun to write.
Shy and Zecora were also fun. I really enjoy these odd pairings. Unfortunately, I don't see a male zebra in the future, as none would want to come this deep into the middle of the pervert country.
Keep in mind that Ponyville is still fairly distant from gossipers. So, while there will be some things later on, I want to maintain the small-town vibe as much as possible.
I know that I always enjoy things that make me think, so I take that as a compliment.
It's been a couple of months... All okay?
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I was taking a break for family stuff, but I'm back now. Provide positive/constructive feedback, and I'll be incentivized to stay longer.